All Comments on 'Danielle's Depravity Ch. 01'

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Carnevil9Carnevil9almost 17 years ago
Very Hot!

Hot stuff! Can't wait for the next installment. I especially like your similes (or are they metaphors?).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Get an editor!

So many mistakes in such a short space!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Excellent content

Awaiting chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
hot

I love the nastiness......

MTL17MTL17over 16 years ago
Please write a sequel.

Please write a sequel. I read the original version of this story I loved it, and this was great just as good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
assume..

..is to make an ass of u and me, but i had always assumed I would not like arse fucking and licking but this story turned me on so much that my partner has just screamed after her first anal rimming by me. That will teach her to read the story with me! Yes, there were some spelling errors but so what, they were not the howlers you sometimes see on here...love Sofi x

luvcum99luvcum99about 13 years ago
Wow a girl after my own heart!

Love the story, nothing like a delicious anal cleaning by a tongue to bond lovers! Can't wait to read the rest of the series.

J

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

lesbian anal <3 amazing author !

looker46looker46over 12 years ago
Amazingly hot action

You ask what I liked best. The answer is two parts of the story. When Beth started rubbing oil on Dani's back rubbing her hand down to her asshole but not quite penetrating was so sexy. It was almost seductive except Dani appears to be very sophisticated and was more a willing participant. In the apartment when Dani leaned over the table and presented her ass to Beth, I was fascinated to find out how that scene would play out. The deep tongue penetration in Dani's asshole and Beth rubbing her pussy and clit was so hot. I almost came with Dani. You have written a highly erotic and well written story. Thank you so much. I am looking forward to the continuation.

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 8 years ago
very good

I like the part where she took all of it in her butt

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good Story

Didn't expect that the tall Bethany who at first seemed in control, would give up and become a somewhat submissive to Danielle. Darn this was really hot and the thought of Beth taking such a huge cock up her ass was really a turn on. Hope the story continues in this hot fashion, good job.

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