All Comments on 'Daniel's Diary, Entry 01'

No sex. Just a small amount of actual beating. Yet, the story really works!

Good job!

I know it may not be the kind of effect the story might be aiming at but it was the response it triggered from me. The aspect is refreshing, the main character's thoughts echo authentically. I also enjoyed the realistic way you described the relationship as a whole. Thank you for sharing it was a great read. I'll be looking for new Entries, that is for sure. I wonder if Rachel keeps a diary of her own ... ;-)

Please write more. Its a really good story

That was very good. I liked how you gave us a look inside your [The main character's] head. Your writing is very good too!

Please write more!

really good read. liked it a lot and think it has a lot of potential to develop way more than this. I would like to read the rest of the story...