All Comments on 'Daphne's Downfall Ch. 02'

A great side trip in your epic. I look forward (some day) to the future training of Starfish and Gumdrop at Lone Oak--couldn't happen to a more deserving pair of women!

Wonderful chapter! The courtroom scene was very entertaining with a female judge in charge. The Nip to Drip test was fun. Loved the way the two frenemies were used to humiliate each other, especially the transition of the Elle character into a disheveled slut. The mental conditioning employed at the Lone Oak has me wanting more on the future adventures of Starfish and Gumdrop. Loved how you came up with those names.

More please! Take these characters through their enslavement. You set them up for some really interesting adventures so do not leave us hanging. The description of the mental conditioning at Lone Oak was pure genius. The branding scene was HOT!

A great side trip. I really enjoyed it and certainly hope that you decide to circle back and add to it. There are so many possibilities and the two go through their training.

Claire Kincaid, a Law & Order fan?

Loved the detour!

Visualizing the fall of Elle Woods to a naked collared slave was priceless. Loved the evolution of Daphne and Elle into a playful, mischievous and spunky sluts exchanging winks after getting used in the slave market. Please take us through the many adventures of Starfish and Gumdrop at Lone Oak.

Please write about Starfish and Gumdrop's time being conditioned into ponygirls. Do they sucumb to slave mind happily becoming sex toys for the rest of their slavery.

Liked the branding scene, and the description of a method to approach a horrible situation. The empathy of Claire trying to help Daph through her limited options (but perhaps some ulterior motives).

But the flipside that this also is an example of the elite getting better options than the poor. Most in the same situation would have faced criminal enslavement. It was only the willingness of another elite to agree to civil penalties that provided Daph with the somewhat better options of civil indenture. I think there are some interesting potential character growth in the Broadstone alumni to extend their actions beyond the narrow sisterhood (and like my comment on Chap 12 of Allison, I know we see signs of this outcome happening in Carl's Recovering Slut 4 and the foundation).

Meanwhile, hope your family safely navigates the health issues. Best...

Thanks, that was a thoroughly enjoyable diversoin

I’m a little confused I don’t remember or recall Amilla being in jail? Will there be more info on this when you are turn to Allison’s story?

I have drafts for four chapters tentatively titled "Avery's Descent into Slavery" that cover the how Avery and Amelia ended up in jail for 30 days and their many adventures inside. Since Allison is unaware of Amelia being in jail I have not mentioned it there but eventually it will come to light. Carl Bradford used Amelia's jail stay in "Recovering Slut Pt. 4". I included the reference in Daphne's story since she is aware of it. My apologies for the delay but life has been really hectic.

More!!!! .....please.

Hopefully you are still working on these stories.

It just got interesting and then it ends. We need another chapter describing the ponygirl training.

Hoping for another chapter, seeing Daphne in training trying not to get slave mind her first real shot of horny juice. With she be a dressage pony girl or go on to the Venus Academy? Who will buy her at the end ? Will Calum buy her, will Clarie?