All Comments on 'Dark as Ivory Pt. 01'

It's well written and well thought out. A little kinkier than I like but it's still so. well done that I couldn't stop reading. Can't wait to read more!

I just....this was so good. I loved the phone games he played with Two. The rape scene. God. The inner turmoil when she thought she was cheating. The videos.... I hope there’s more

Wow. That is so well written. It's a little too hard for me, but I was so enticed.

Thank you for my new wet nightmares.

Really liked the darkness

Loved it. Please carry on with it.

Sometimes you have a lightbulb moment, I was a voracious reader early with no limits to my reading - I’ve only now realised John Galt at 16 was my first introduction to the lifestyle ...

Loving this story, can't wait to read more.

Every time I read one of your stories I can't get over how great they are.

"Payne_Hall" - is that like "torture chamber?"

5 stahs I love the mind games. The piss? Not so much.

There's more humiliation in the mind games than the excrement.

I just loved that post... The funnel? Genius. Thank you!

Good God 🥵

Good premise.

But, for my taste, too much pain/threatof pain/promise of pain, and not enough direct sex.

Three stars.

This is so dark and I’ve never had such a wicked smile on my face before whilst reading. So well written and God damn, so hot 🔥