All Comments on 'Dark Horizons: Laura Ch. 06'

Excellent so far. I love this genre of literature where the charming black man seduces the reluctant married white lady and gets her pregnant; especially when it's well written like this

Ray's much too domineering though. All this "Yes master, no master" is irritating and makes this mini masterpiece unrealistic. With Ray now getting very fond of Laura, he improbably shares her with a shady gynaecologist when he should have been protecting her like an angry guard-dog

I bet Bill Cosby really loved this chapter!

Kapparho

So True with how you write it. For me anyways. When I submit or GIVE ALL of my self to a Master or Dom of which I had maybe one hand full of 5 Mens like that only all I wanted was them to be happy and Please them and I couldnt wait to they called me to them or wanted me to please them again. Just like I do for my Black Master now. I love pleasing his every need.

Keep up the good work and how you keep it real. And as for that Doctor wanting Laura I know first hand how when I went to parties or places with a Dom or Master how Other Mens was hitting on me or wanted to like try me or get me to come with them and belong to them.