All Comments on 'Dark Secret'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Dark indeed!

A very nice story, well-told and with a marvellous ending - the only thing you could perhaps have done better was to post it at Halloween, but who cares?!

Thank you for sharing a great talent with us.

TheLovelyLickerish1TheLovelyLickerish1over 13 years ago
Nice!

Dark and twisted, with a not-so-normal explanation.

More, please! I can't wait to see what Gryphon has in store for Julie! (assuming this is the direction in which you will go, otherwise, I'll have to be surprised...)

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 13 years ago
Details... Please

This could serve as the outline to a great story, a great sexy story, a great sexy, dark, mystery, or? IMHO, that's where it is now... ready to become great.

Please.

BarbaraBarbaraabout 13 years ago
Wicked humour, typically experienced by English aristocracy, in their youth. Voted a 5!

Your feedback indicated a rising fan club base, consisting of 'mistress' wannabes of both sexes. Putting you down as a favorite authoress today!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
From a different place I understand...

When I was young I got into self bondage too. I didn't go near as fancy as this one did but I found I liked to sleep naked and tied up. I was afraid to really get stuck but i wanted to feel really tied up so eventually I asked my brother to tie me up for me and then untie me. I did that with clothes on and for short times for fun but I started craving it really bad so I had to ask him to tie me up on my bed naked but only if he promised to untie me before our parents woke up. My bedroom locked from the inside only and I was too scared my parents might barge in so my brother would have to come in and out through my window. I have to admit it was a turn on to have my window unlocked and sleep tied up and naked. My brother never took advantage of me and as far as I know he only blabed to his wife years later after he got married. I'm not into that as one of my top things any more and told my brother when he asked some time ago. The problem is my mind got a little more naughty

TREKnRayTREKnRayover 12 years ago
Dark Secret.

What a precious story. Until the discovery of the pit I was reminded of a shipmate of mine who was in his upper seventies. We were walking around Palma de Mallorca. There is a sex shop called Beate Uhse. He bought some handcuffs and a butt plug. He would cuff himself to his bunk while we were at sea with the plug up his ass. He said he was afraid of falling out of bed in rough weather.

He broke the butt plug. He had me walk back to Beate Uhse with him so he could return it. I told him he couldn't do it. They wouldn't want it back. He did it anyway. The young woman who waited on him said she couldn't accept a used toy. She gave him a new on free of charge and told him to enjoy.

He was a real character.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I liked the Lovecraftian feel. If only one of the Elder Gods could have invaded her dreams and torture-fucked her...

qarlcueqarlcueover 11 years ago
Sexy, wicked, dark

You have a creative mind, excellent writing skills, and your stories are sexy wicked, and dark. I enjoyed it. Where do you come up with these?

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