All Comments on 'Dark Travelers Ch. 01'

I'm confused, why the re write? I want a chapter 7!

whoops?..lol love your story it is one of my favorites but can we have chapter 7 please?:-)

I am aware that this is a re-post. A kind anon alerted me to a little oversight of mine in the original text.

If I had not made these changes, I am certain that the story would have eventually been reported and taken down. I do not know why the first draft was not replaced with the revised vision. I am trying to delete the original chapter one as I type this.

Chapter 7 is in the works and nearly complete. Don't lose faith. :3

Again, you've my apologies.

Thank you,

Ginnnnnnnnnnna!

Well then let me thank you in advance for chapter 7:-)

Age was an issue in the original posting, correct? Good story, look forward to updates. :)

*sigh*

I never read the original version and I don't know yet how it will continue, but sometimes the age issues seem a tad silly.

For instance this chapter tells us that Andi is nearly 18 (I think... 3 years younger than her sister with her birthday coming up?), but from her behavior I would have said that she was 14 or 15 at the most.