All Comments on 'Dark Travelers Ch. 01'

by GinaTina

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JhyrJhyralmost 12 years ago
Age issues?

*sigh*

I never read the original version and I don't know yet how it will continue, but sometimes the age issues seem a tad silly.

For instance this chapter tells us that Andi is nearly 18 (I think... 3 years younger than her sister with her birthday coming up?), but from her behavior I would have said that she was 14 or 15 at the most.

ZanysDellZanysDellalmost 13 years ago
Age

Age was an issue in the original posting, correct? Good story, look forward to updates. :)

sexynoisesturnmeonsexynoisesturnmeonabout 13 years ago
ohhhh I C

Well then let me thank you in advance for chapter 7:-)

GinaTinaGinaTinaabout 13 years agoAuthor
Hello folks...

I am aware that this is a re-post. A kind anon alerted me to a little oversight of mine in the original text.

If I had not made these changes, I am certain that the story would have eventually been reported and taken down. I do not know why the first draft was not replaced with the revised vision. I am trying to delete the original chapter one as I type this.

Chapter 7 is in the works and nearly complete. Don't lose faith. :3

Again, you've my apologies.

Thank you,

Ginnnnnnnnnnna!

sexynoisesturnmeonsexynoisesturnmeonabout 13 years ago
ummmm

whoops?..lol love your story it is one of my favorites but can we have chapter 7 please?:-)

lilaconelilaconeabout 13 years ago

I'm confused, why the re write? I want a chapter 7!

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