All Comments on 'Darkness and The Light'

by WhspersInTheDark

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mushy!!!

Sniffing!!1Im wiping my eyes here,,,,wow...i loved it..cant wait to read more about these two and there adventures..

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wonderful

I loved this story. I almost cried when I thought she had died. This was a wonderful erotic love story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent!

Great Story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Can't wait for more!

That was great. Please write another story about these two. I can't wait!

madengineermadengineerover 17 years ago
WOW!!

I enjoy good reading. This is some of the best writing and plot work that I have ever seen. As a retired engineer I have been reading for a long time. This would rank among the best ten stories of this type I have ever read.

coffinbaitcoffinbaitover 17 years ago
loved it

I would love to hear more about Michael and his firey little witch. I felt like I was reading a short story in a book. The characters felt so real and human. Being a child of the goddess myself I feel like I could relate to Autumn. Please tell me there will be more stories about this wonderful couple!

ImmortalRomanceImmortalRomanceover 17 years ago
Very erotic

I loved this piece. It was sensuous and emotional. I hope to read more of your writing. Keep up the good work.

HedgeWitchHedgeWitchabout 16 years ago
Ohhh myyy!!

Ohhh Whispers...you have made my day soooo much brighter! The Goddess works is so many mysterious ways and I'm sure that Autumn and her Vampire will be back in many stories to come! Or at least I pray so! Please continue to write these spell binding stories! Blessed Be

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
What can I say?

Beautifully written and moving story.Another chapter what be great to see how Autumn is adjusting to her new life.

KayVampKayVampover 15 years ago
Loved it

I've read this several times and it just doesn't get old. My favorite story by far. I hope you'll revisit them for us in the near future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Brilliant

I luved it. Fantastic work!

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