All Comments on 'Darkside Stories - The Fool'

by Tsune

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice!

I enjoyed that this story had plot, character development and good writing in addition to sexy erotic-ness. I liked the character and would be interested to read more from this author!

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 5 years ago
This is good writing

One of the most well written stories I have read on this site.

Oh, and erotic too.

TsuneTsuneabout 5 years agoAuthor

Thanks folks! I appreciate your kind words. Please consider favoriting it too. <3

JohnLucJohnLucabout 5 years ago
Intense and sensual

Very well written. Great characters. Saucy ghosts and demons and giggity - oh my!

Part of me was half-waiting for some tentacle action. That part needs to fuck off and read Fisherman's Wife or something. Because this was excellent.

Hat's off to you, Tsune!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nope

That was a mess. Jumped around and in the end was just too improbable and unbelievable. Even for science fiction.

MondayyyMondayyyabout 5 years ago
100/10

I've read this 3 times now. It's really well written and it's such a good story!

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