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"She worried about the smell"

She needs to learn a new phrase. It is called feminine hygeine. A douche to be exact. And no, it is not a town ib France

She smelled like a old whore, and inside the pickup the smell was unmistakable. Old Billy pulled off the deserted road and asked her what the hell happened. She broke down and started to tell the story, never seeing Billy pull the old single action Colt from the glovebox and put it to her cheating ass whore head. Only the coyotes would know, goodby, bitch!

Typical Hating Wives story. What stands out unfortunately is the terrible ending: “She worried about the smell. She rolled down the window” That’s it! That’s how the story ends. Wow! Takes real thick skin to not feel somewhat nauseated by this sentence. Add to this deep puzzlement by someone taking this sentences for an ending of a story. I hope you experience a sharp learning curve prior to any future story.

Let's face it, she is a slut and whore. This is a loving wife?

Very good, but you need to change the ending. How about her going back for the autograph.

I can't see what everyone is complaining about, it's fiction isn't it? These guys havn't heard of fantasy or play in bed, so they must be lousy lovers. Just a quick bang in the sack , 'I'm awright Jack'. This is probably why they are so afraid the wife is off to find some real pleasure.

Thanks for the story it was OK. Write some more!

...some improbabilities.

Let's start with the good stuff: the descriptions of the orgasms; the way her wet panties are stuck in her slit; the mundane things that run through your head like worrying about the smell.

Now for the improbabilities: can't see a woman who will suck her man's dick but not want him to go down on her - oral usually goes both ways, or else they don't mind receiving but won't give; cumming so quickly when you're not used to oral; so much cumming from so little effort. But this is a fantasy, so what the hell. :-D

Why are people so nasty in this category? >:-/

Lucky girl getting to meet her idol.

But she can say it was her Idol that caused the divorce and not her lying ass

The only thing that smells around here is this story.

She lies, cheats, nothing to like here.