All Comments on 'Date Night'

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lc69hunterlc69hunter11 months ago

Not nice what the two of you did to Nick. That is why I didn't give you a higher score

rjr_1954rjr_195411 months ago

I thought this was an amazing story! I expect a sequel. I'm not going to be critical about the story, Nick was just a pawn. It was about you and your date! Awesome, 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Well written for a first story. Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This dude isn't going to be with this gf for long. And they're both assholes for stringing along this other guy. At some point, she'll decide to do a lot more than just be a prick tease and go full blown cum dumpster, then this shit show will finally end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Clever premise.

Not nearly enough in the way of foreplay/preliminries.

Too automatic. Too mechanical.

Needed her touching his cock. Could be at her initiative. Could be because he told her to.

Needs her being required to tell him how wet she is, and the specifics of what she wanted/needed him to do to her.

Four stars.

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