All Comments on 'Date with Destiny-Demon Style Ch. 05'

Lyzander, he'd be the best for her, I really don't like the mother though. Excellent chapter now please write the next one :)

Lyzander. He seems like the only one that can handle her

The choices are to exquisite & delectable in their own unique ways! I'm so happy that you brought Darian back in though it makes choosing all the much harder. Dominant, passionate & physically strong men always get my engine revving & you definitely know how to create such characters! But I'm stalling cuz I don't know who should be the lucky one and/or forever one! Be it Darian or Lyzander that Kara chooses, I will be very happy!

Thank you for writing such a creative story! Even the grammatical "oopsy's" here & there don't bother me like they normally do! Don't make us wait to long for ch. 6!!!

K.Veracious

Darian!!!

Lyzander!

DARIAN!!!

Lyzander, I love guys with a scar for some reason ;). Adds to the charm!

I'm going with my favorite - Lyzander! I agree with Sheanna's comment and can see Lyzander as being the only one who could really handle her.

TEAM DARIN!!!!!!

DARIN

Lyzander

Lyzander and Darian at the same time! It's too hard to pick just one...

Lyzander

DARIAN !!!

Lyzander

All three! Go big or go home.

Darian first then marries Lyzander

None. She should request more time with each (sexually jus too tease her and pleasure her) it wouls stretch the story as well also include more drama wid the brothers ( ňøτ the twins) n also a little succubus drama. Have the succubae be involved in a sexual incounter with one of her suitors and have kara respond implusively n give her virginity to someone unexpected.it will cause a twist in the story

Darian!!!! I think that he should win the whole thing.!!

She never actually chose Lysander, he just sneaked into her shower. So she should choose him now. I feel like a half demon princess myself, getting to choose a prince.

Yves

Darian should be first. :)

Ladrian by far he has got to be my favorite :D

Ladrian

They already seem to have a connection. Maybe she will bite him back...

Lyzander, Lyzander, Lyzander, Lyzander, Lyzander, Lyzander, Lyzander, Lyzander, Lyzander, Lyzander, Lyzander, oh and did I say Lyzander?

Darian!!!Darian!!!Darian!!!I would love it to be Darian!!!Love him so much...although the others are great,but I like a lover who bites...;p

I would say to put a spin in it---she can sleep with all of them so all 3 at the same time.

Definitely

Definitely lyzander

Darian is the one that should be her 1st!!! Really i wish she could go on a date with all three of them at one time and after that she would makes her choose!! she gets to asks more queastions and they find out about each other. i cant wait to read the next chapter!!

DARIAN!!!!

...Lyzander. Definitely.

But I like jazz1190's idea of them going on a group date, and THEN Kara chooses.

Seriously, though - Lyzander all the way.

Pleeease!

i like all three but i think lyzander or darian are going to win based on everyone's comments. i personally like both but even though she freaked out over him biting her (which i don't get but of course i do have a slight biting fetish) i have liked darian from the beginning.

but in all honesty this is my opinion:

pick yourself! i mean it's your story and your characters so you should chose the ending! who do YOU think she would be happiest with? what personality does she fit with best? i really think since you are the author you should do what you think is right.

i think you should choose Darian. i've loved him from the beginning. but for me it doesn't really matter if another guy is choosen, i'll still love your story, cause its like one of the best stories i've read!

but still Darian.

Lardian please she had the most fun with him

Lyzander!

I think it would be a good twist if she became lucifers one and only wife. He falls in love with her and they have crazy sexy demon sex for the rest of eternity :)

Or if you're not happy with that, I think Darian... That way he can have a little nibble on that succulent virgin flesh before he deflowers her.

It has to be Lyzander he has been through so much with the priest thing and deserves something good in his life. A close second is Darian though.

... should be KARA'S one and only!

is the only choice especially after we learned why he bit her! It doesn't get any better than a virgin princess. The twins made sure he knew exactly what she was. So although not completely innocent he has honestly apologized and promised never to bite her again unless she asks for it. Well maybe it's time to ask for it....besides that who I want her to end up w/when this is all over!

I like the idea of a triple date then choosing LYZANDER!! BUT I like the idea of her becoming Lucifer's wife also!

Arghh! Whatever you choose, do it quick!

defo...and for him to be her husband!!

There was something about the way he approached her, the fact he told her about his past when she asked, that he showed her what to expect with him. She seemed to want and need a strong hand and head co-mingled with a compassion that meets hers, and I see that in Lyzander.

He won't cater to her, and instead of giving her what she wants he'll give her what she needs. Not a over-experienced, soft, sex toy. He's experienced, but dominant. Someone who won't be cowed into submission. He desires her enough to apologize, to be open and honest. Something her mother isn't.

She didn't pick him yet, it's his turn to be picked!

That, and his little game with her was HOT so the actual sex should be HOTTER!!!

Loving this story! All along ive felt she would end up with Lyzander. And i bet the sex with him would be HOT! And she hasnt picked him yet, its his turn :)

Seriously, Darian has grown on me.

I really like Darian! And people can learn to enjoy being bit ;-)

darian all the way(: he just sounds the hottest and to me you set the story up for them to fall in love with eachother!

It made my heart melt when he begged!

It's hard to pick between Darian and Lyzander. Darian seems like a great guy who'll work well for her. He's impulsive but sweet. But I wanna know more about Lyzander. Grrrrrr.... can't pick. For now she should pick Lyzander as her next test run, find out a little more about him. That also adds the benefit of not exposing Darian to that tasty tasty virgin flesh. Dunno who she should choose though.

Arggh couldn't decide between lyzander or Darien.

Think of what he could do with that tail !!

I love Lyzander, it should be him

Im really pissed off that you made a cliffhanger ending. but I can wait right? patience is a virtue. O yea I hope she picks Darian, I know I'll love someone to eat me lol anyway great story looking forward to next chapter.

I am not into BDSM or anything, but in this case your demons seem remarkably vanilla. Indeed the princess is not very demon-like; only a little feisty. The brothers that were removed seem a bit more appropriate to hell. Other things that seem odd: if she really wants to be friends with the cook, why not spend the day with him? I vote for Lyzander. Try to turn the heat up a bit; the sex is like the rest of it surprising bland.

good story! mmm

But I like Lyzander and Darian.. But I think she should go with Darian she has a little bit of a emotional connection to him .

Love this story. I can't wait. Which ever prince is chosen i would love the story regardless

First you make it a cliff hanger and then you make us choose?! MEAN ;D

I'm going to go with Anonymous here, we need more, so she should go with each one again! I'd love to see her end up with Lyzander and Darian...combine powers, make for a much more powerful union ;D

Looking forward to the results!

Lyzander!

She should end up with darian. he's sooo hot

darian :D

Lyzander has won me over! Ladrian's dominance would be too much for her all the time. Darian is sweet but lacks control. I also didn't like that he couldn't handle the brothers himself. She doesn't want to spend her life dealing with his problems.

Lyzander is a bit cocky but strong, sexy and attentive to her needs. He consistently tries to seek her out and he actually talks to her. Their's is the most relationship like out of the bunch and her mind keeps going back to him when she's with other guys. He's the one.

Lyzander, ftw!

she hasn't actually chosen Lysander, so it's definitely time to.

LUCIFER!.. She seems more suited to be his wife, she's not afraid to stand up to him and i think he enjoys it when she tells him off. Obviously she isnt looking for love just honesty and that has to be rare in Hell and im sure even Lucifer could be honest enough for her. And she'd blast him one if she caught him playing his lil games with her.

its about who she should give her viginity to right? .. and i think she should give her viginity to Lucifer! and then marry Darian!.. Hell even if she gave her viginity to Darian and married Lucifer.. Damn im torn between them cause i think Lucifer is hot to. haaahaaa .

Naturally, Lucifer and the other princes' sons have the first shot at the princess. If they don't work out, the secondary rulers of the circles have their sons try for the girl."

You see Lucifer is also in the running .. Darian doesnt say Lucifer's sons and the other princes' sons, he says Lucifer!.. So Lucifer is my choice. ummm that would make it 4 still in contention and she will have to eliminate one before giving any of them her viginity. I'd say get eliminate Ladrian.

Lyzander!

While I enjoy all three characters and would be happy with whoever you chose, I won't lie. When she let Darian back in the running I was ecstatic!

Lyzandar.

Darian as long as he isn't too in control or Lucifer also seems interesting

I'm leaning toward the redemption of Darian so-to-speak. I think you should give some thought as to how you want to craft this beyond just a by-the-numbers vote, though. Ladrian may make a good second because so far he seems to be a flatter character, but the order does not necessarily culminate in who she chooses in the end, either. So far she's had several angry moments with Darian and several conversational ones with Lyzander. Interesting comment about Lucifer although I don't really follow the thought process leading to her actually choosing him based on their interactions so far. But then one never really can foresee when a visit from the plot fairy may occur. How exactly do you see her choosing in the end, anyway (I don't mean the answer but how she goes about making the decision)? Or shall all be revealed...later...?

~L

Such a tough choice. There's something about darian that I love. Maybe it's because he is rash and hotheaded, yet has a caring and sweet side(a lot of contradictions like our dear princess) But then there is lyzander who has that misunderstood good guy that's a little rough around the edges. I think they will both complement her personality splendidly but in different ways. Can not wait to read more!

It's definely between Lyzander and Darian those are the only two who really stand out but if I had to choose Id pick Lyzander shr seems to have real connection not out of pity , guilt or just plain pleasure.

I think I'm leaning more towards the king himself he seems to really enjoy her and I can see her keeping everyone with her no BS attitude !!!

Oh, please!

Darian please! I love him as a character! That's who I would pick :)

Darian because he seems more suited to her than the others

Oh man! I am between Darian and Lyzander. My heart is involved and it leans more towards Darian! I love Lyzander because of how honest he was with her! Ladrian, should be last because I did not get that much emotion from him. I can't wait to read the next chapters!!!

Oh man! I am between Darian and Lyzander. My heart is involved and it leans more towards Darian! I love Lyzander because of how honest he was with her! Ladrian, should be last because I did not get that much emotion from him. I can't wait to read the next chapters!!! Not Lucifer, to gross!

HAVE WEAK AND STRONG POINTS TO THEM, BUT WHY IS IT I SEE SOMETHING IN HER THAT IS GOING TO SHAKE HELL, WELL SHAKE HELL THE HELL UP!

Darian

Lyzander

Definitely going for Lyzander.

Darian i just love a wild man and they match so well

Darian

Please let it be him!

I just love Darian. There is nothing wrong with a bite here and there. LOL

Lyzander please

Lyzander they have a spark there that couldn't be missed

Lucifer for sure^^ I like a story with a twist! d:

Just to be different ;)

But I do like Darian was well. He seems cool.

It's just necessary :)

Lyzander

Lyzander!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DARIAN!!!!