All Comments on 'Dating a Porn Actress Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's a great story but here are too many typos. You cannot rely on spellcheck alone, you have to re-read your text more carefully.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hope there will be another chapter! Please hurry!!!

LenhubzxLenhubzxover 2 years ago

Quite is not quiet. Great story but check the spelling and use.

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Waiting for her to start back screwing other men.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

When writing from the first person point of view, you do not need to put the character's thoughts in quotes. Everything is already their thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awkward writing. Stopped reading here.

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