All Comments on 'Dating Rules And Pretty Fools Ch. 02'

I'm happy to say my comment from chapter #1 was on the money. This is indeed a well written and intriguing story. And the occasional touches of humor throughout, caused by Otis' naivety are masterfully placed and lighten the serious nature of this story beautifully. Can't wait to find out where you plan to take this sweet and innocent young man. Hopefully there'll always be someone like Hudson or Missy around to rescue him when needed.

Your stories all tend to capture my imagination. I love this character so far and I'm intrigued by others in the story and i didn't get to read ch 1 yet! Otis is adorable! But he needs a protector and i hope Hudson will be the one to do it.

I have a feeling that everyone in the story is adorable, even including Jackie.