All Comments on 'Dating Rules And Pretty Fools Ch. 03'

For the third time you've left me both intrigued and feeling a desperate need to want to protect, Otis, a fictional character. This beautiful young man is so beguiling and innocent that one can't help but fall for him. #3 was another great chapter, giving us a look into the seedier side of life as well as seeing the sexual awakening of an adorably naive young man. Well done!

Nice touch to get to know Jasper a bit as he offered himself to Hudson. The sorts of people that run these places are pathetic but again they wouldn’t exist if there was no demand so it just makes the whole scenario sad, but I’m really glad you’ve chosen to write about it as society endeavors to see the signs of human trafficking. I’m interested to hear about what Hudson thought about his kiss with Otis that seemingly came out of nowhere and how he felt when Otis ran out of his apartment?

Otis is adorable but i hope he gets someone to protect him soon. And i wanted to cry for kids like jasper.. not cool. Hope Hudson takes em down eventually.

I’m entranced buy these characters. I can’t wait to see where their story goes. Excellent work!