All Comments on 'Dating Rules And Pretty Fools Ch. 07'

Oh, what you did to me in the is chapter! As much as I would feel the need to protect this beautiful sweet innocent young man from anyone harming him, I have to admit I was as turned on as Hudson by the thought of Otis naked and collared. The only thing that snapped me out of that vision was the humor coming from Otis taking everything that is said literally. LOL, I was waiting for that bed bug shoe to drop. Great chapter!

Interesting. Let’s see how Jackie responds to Otis not wanting to go to his club or with a rat. The kissing scene in the car was nice too.

These two Are so adorable. I hope you can maintain his innocence despite the events surrounding him closely. I hope hudson can keep otis close and protect him bc that innocence obviously makes him vulnerable to the baddies. Missu makes me laugh or maybe it's otis trying to understand her. Great ch. Favorite story right now