All Comments on 'Dating Tonight?'

You're not even an apology for a man.

Go back to abusing yourself.

As a writer I think you're nothing but a creep and a moron who should get back in the closet where you belong. Please do us all a favor and give up writing.

Sometimes we write for ourselves; sometimes we write for others; and sometimes, for both. I hope this one was for you. Although the story had some touches that were your own, it was a story that, for the most part, we have read time again.

I had a friend that used to do this with his wife all the time. They both loved the role playing. They would play on the street , in bars and hotels. Added a lot of spice.

As to originality I can't comment, but as a fun little story, I thought it was great