by Lightbrian
Very confusing with daughter’s name changing several times. Liked story. Don’t know if Athena is writing in second language if so congrats.
Daughter Ask Parents Let Threesome? is Google Translate that bad?... get an editor or a dozen.
Anyway, that's a no-no for me.
I liked the story. I want to read more but the English was very bad. You need better translation
Nice concept, however (reading wise) I'll assume that English is not your primary language. Maybe Russian ? . . .