by mypenname3000
naughty and original. I have never read this plot device before
not sure what rock avatar lives under but the plot has definitely been done. That isn't to say you didn't do a good job. I'm not really into the airhead baby girl voice you gave the MC but at least you didn't write about her hymen being several inches inside her pussy. That would have been an instant 1* if you had.
How and where do I meet a mother and daughter like them? Loved it and can’t wait for the second part.