by silkstockingslover
Oh, Jasmine! I know that this is a re-write, but really! It has taken me ages to get through it all. I had to keep stopping to see to myself, as the cuckold has gone to work, and I'm here alone! My bed sheet has several very wet patches! Your filthy imagination has reached new heights of depravity with this wonderful story. It's so wonderfully dirty and delicious! I've decided to ignore the rules, so you get 5 stars for the words, and 5 for the illustrations, (I especially loved the cock sucking and the fucking pictures!) so you get 10 stars in all? Is this a first?
Nothing new here. A typical SSL black/white tale of unrealistic debauchery. I once read everything she wrote, these days I skim. Nothing changes from story to story.
Bullshit you write for yourself. You're a complete and total ratings whore. Not that that is a bad thing, but please don't pretend you don't care about the readers. Other than that, another good rewrite from you.
5 for the writing and 4 for the illustrations only because the contrasts were all over the place, some too dark and others way too light. Great story.
You have written some rubbish recently but this is definitely your redemption piece!
No thanks; pictures are cartoonish and your writing has gotten routine. Three stars.
5 stars. Skimmed through it. Ten pages are too many to read. Got the drift. Liked the pictures, and I always love to see Jasmine having sex.
Did someone actually say that 8 inches isn't very big? The average is 5.5 inches, so 8 is somewhere in the top 1% of dick sizes. Sure, there are bigger, but that doesn't mean it isn't big.
I remember reading the original, cant remeber any mention that they where black, and also remember that aunt carol was pregnant when she came to visit. It was ok.
654. Super sexy! A little hard to see sex details with mostly black bodies, but still exciting. Love your long and detailed episodes especially with the multiple conclusions that, for the first time, do not leave the reader hanging. Good you are starting to have more illustrated stories. That definitely increases the heat!
Silk,
you've done such wonderful writing and some beautiful illustrations before.
The church one with the preacher, daughter and more comes to mind. These illustrations are not befitting your fuck/suck scenes.
PLease have daughter whore/slut type stories with colorful illiustrations like the above mentioned and the lesbian nice ones
Terrible choice to have em black as then the father would need to be there :p but then again makes since why he is so loved because he is there...
Lul yah I just had to get that joke out of my system