by Satsumabook123
I love the feigned sleep-play. I used to do it with my ex-wife. She took it an extra step insisting she was asleep but always said it with a smile. Somehow...this made it even MORE exciting. I miss her....
Good story as far as you took it. This needs to be taken to an experienced Proof Reader.
The progression is an experience in itself. Your natural tendency to peak the stimulation and with hold her orgasm is so built with tension that she has climbed the peak and simply goes higher!
I am not inclined to suggest how subsequent submissions might/should go but will say: Please continue,.
Sexy mature young man Sam should have a spray of sexy chest hair for his gorgeous manly chest! Please write more!
It needed to continue and bring into story. Then he could fuck then both anally.
It was good,but he should of fucked the mother, she wanted to fucked, your story didn't take it that far,you cut it short,which was disappointing. If you want people to read your stories, don't cut the story short, you have people wondering now, if the boy was going to fuck her now, not counting that he was cheating with the daughters mother, please continue with the story, you left your readers hanging!