Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
I couldn't believe it. I had been fucking my daddy for two months, and nothing. She claimed to have done it just three weeks ago. I looked down at my belly, my stomach churning. I fought against a flutter of panic.
Was there something wrong with me?
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month agopoorly written, i am sorry. pronoun confusion multiple times - this distracts the reader and takes them right out. little build up or details. there is no tension or hesitation - she just willingly does everything without a care. the entire scene is just unlikely taking adding to the difficulty to continue to read. i stopped mid-way page 2. great concept but poor execution.
bigdaddyg1238 months ago"Daughter's Breeding Desire Ch. 01:" - This story of familial incest initiation of teenage daughter's becoming "a woman" by being consummated and impregnated by the daughter's father (or in the absence of her living father, by the eldest brother)! This is an exciting theme for the incest/taboo genre of great pornographic reading.
There's an issue, though, that many writer/authors are not up front about, i.e., story subject matters, etc., and that is the "tag" descriptions of the stories content. Page two (2) of this otherwise good story, is devoted, not just in a passing manner, but grammatical, in-depth anal, shit-tube fucking details. The subject and graphic length details--about two-thirds of page two (2) of this story--is not disclosed to the reader's prior to reading and finding approximately half the story consists of Anal, shit-tube fucking!! I'm of the opinion that every reader expects the major story details to be indexed in the "tag" listing, available to the reader(s) before they devote time and delve into the story. I'll read more of this writer's reading material, however, I'll more closely scrutinize the stories content.
