All Comments on 'Daughter's Friend'

I miss the stories with hard femdom and watersports.

Ended too soon. Could have had Josh finally screw Penny and have that turn into either Josh dating both or have some 3somes. Plus he could get both pregnant..

Shelia should have shared Josh with her daughter at some point.

What’s the point in making a virgin into a slur if they only every have sex with one person.

You haven’t published anything for the last couple of months.

I just want to make sure that you’re okay.

Are you going to write new stories

Incredibly stupid story, and very poorly written. Long-winded, dragging narration, lame dialog. And a really inane 'mom's who's a miserable hypocrite in the correcting of a skank daughter ('raised her better'?) When the mom is just bent badly herself. Waste of disk space.

You need more help in the editing.

Your story has promised, you have a Talent for a story.

You just need more polish to the Story.

dumb

Writing in present tense often makes it difficult to read. Try writing in past tense aas She was not she is etc. It makes the story more managable