All Comments on 'Daughter's Friend Ch. 01'

Very hot! We need a second chapter!

Fine premise.

But sex is much too automatic. Much too rushed.

Needed much more in the way of teasing/foreplay/edging.

Needed many more DETAILS.

Needed more dialog about how she knew he looked at her. What was it that he liked so much? Her face? Her lips? Her ass? Her legs? Her breasts? Had he ever masturbated to thoughts of her?

Three stars.

oh ya

A usual plot but the story is well-written. The descriptions were excellent adding physical and emotional detail. the seduction scene was too quick and was the sex scene. More detail about the feelings of Brooke and Ben would have added to the sensuality of the story. Still, a fun read that warrants a follow-up.

I liked the setup, but agree that having more details about the physical and emotional sensations would've made it better. I still gave it 5*

When is part two cumming