All Comments on 'Daughters OF Male Talent'

Great story!

Wow, talk about a cold start. Just a jump into incest with no lead up into it. I suggest most 'talent' would have some difficulty in having sex with family without some buildup.

"Part 2 soon."

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Once again, no chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.

Great idea, but zero 'passion' the whole thing felt very robotic and very very far from erotic. Get another writer to tweak and you're onto something amazing

Poorly written with too many punctuation and syntax errors to mention. The concept is fine, but the execution lacks. I could not get past page two.