All Comments on 'Daughters of the Moon Pt. 03'

I like this story. These vampires are not behaving as one would normally expect, and that is something I very much appreciate. There are a lot of similarities with your Orc story but not enough that it seems like the same story in a new wrapper. Keep going and keep improving your editing, you are onto something good here!

Thanks! I really appreciate the positive comments. It helps motivate me to keep writing!

Also I should shout out my editor, Liter Knight. I couldn’t have done this without them.

Ignore the last comment on ch2.i literally started this yesterday and bam ch3 came 2day

@redlion I did laugh to myself a little when I read your comment. There will be a few more this week!