All Comments on 'Dave's Best Week Ever'

Well done for a first story. Over the top sexy as fuck fun.

Nice try for first story but I do not care for the daddy talk and story is written without a good flow, too choppy.

I had problems with the run-on sentences!

Non-stop hot. The boy doesn't miss a beat. Next??

Thank you, Rainyday493, that means a lot to me. This was my second attempt at publishing something here. The first was so horribly written, it was rejected quickly. I then worked with some volunteer editors to figure out how to write better. I encourage you to try also, I'm sure you have some fantasies floating around in your brain you'd like to share.

I gave this story five stars because as a first attempt it deserved an A. I'm an old guy myself but I have some stories about the last century that would curl your hair! Good luck with your erotic writing career. Regards

There has to be a sequel where all these women and Dave move into Sandy's house and have the life they are all looking for.

They are all missing something in their lives and this story provides the basis for taking care of their needs, romantic & sexual.

Excellent story. Looking forward to reading more from you when they are available.