All Comments on 'David and Jess Ch. 05'

I'm really enjoying this story, particularly the slow build up. I'm glad that things kind of blew up with the big reveal in this chapter. If everyone was fully accepting of Jess as feminine, it would drain the story of its tension.

Having said that, Daniel as the supportive friend is a great character.

Loving the story line. Excited for the next chapter.

Loving each chapter. Holding my breath waiting for a new chapter. So sweet. Fantastic writing.

This is story is absolutely beautiful. A love story with lots of eroticism too. Thank you so much for this gift and for sharing chapters so quickly!