All Comments on 'David's Ordeal'

I liked this very much!

Thanks

John

But it still made the contest worthwhile! A great story, and excellent description of some complex games.

We need more sexy under the skirt knicker stories like this instead of the usual straight bang bang thankyou mam stuff

I love satin and dominant women, so this was a real treat for me. Thanks!

I'm new to this genre and enjoyed your story very much. I think that I'll be fantasizing about this type of fun more and more in my 'solo' sessions. Thanks.

Near the end you refer to the "end of his ordeal"? He was stuck in a room with a bunch of horny women that kept sticking his head under their dresses. It sounded like he only struggled for breathe one or two times? Other than worrying about catching a nasty disease, why would this be an ordeal? One thing baffled me. Why wasn't he trying to lick and munch away on all the pussy? This "face sitting" seems to be a silly game. If he starts to have a difficult time breathing and no amount of moving around frees him to breath, use your teeth! He'd breathe in a heart beat.

Sorry. I just don't get it.

It right. I had treat reading this. Wonderful imagination. superb reading experience.

Great!

May all our ordeals be such as this one

Lol

I enjoyed this! Inventive and fun. Easy to picture myself as David - lucky guy.

Your writing flows and is vivid. Looking forward to more of yours!