David's Revenge

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I also borrowed a few characters from "The Perfect Crime"- Sir Robert Lawnvale, and his wife Cynthia Lawnvale, nee Mc McMillan. A thousand thanks.

Now, to steal a line from some very distinguished colleagues- LIGHTEN UP!!

Why is it that every major automotive manufacturer in the world makes an SUV?

They all forgot how to spell station wagon.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 hours ago

Uhm, am I the only one who sees the huge glaring hole in all those children being given to those couples illegally? Commercial surrogacy is illegal in the uk. A third party cannot profit from it, nor can a surrogate be paid anything other than expenses, though admittedly, there is a loophole there in that the technically is no limit. Don't even get me started on the international implications.

LT56 started out really strong, but then you just fumbled the story. The consequences of such an operation being discovered would have been huge. Not this flash in the pan bullshit he has going on here. The American and Canadian men who participated would, at the very least, be facing some form of serious jail time, tremendous fines, and humongous public backlash. The same for most continental European men. The men from the rest of the world, I can't comment on.

Lt56's ending was just so pathetically lackluster.

fredbrownfredbrownabout 1 month ago

Alas poor Marc, we knew him well

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Fun stuff - good work.

sigh.. we will never see Mr. Hendrix's equal.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

loved the story and had to give it a 5 because of LaValliere getting the crap kicked out of him again.

willyk1212willyk12122 months ago

i like your stuff but this was awefull sorry

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