All Comments on 'Dawn's Adventures Ch. 01'

I was a USAF wife to a junior officer, and we swapped often with the couple sharing our duplex in base housing. Great story; write more!

Asshole story by asshole author.

Husband is serving his country on deployment and his shit wife cheats on him and cucks him.

This tale is an absolute insult to all serving husbands and wives. Especially to those on deployment.

I suggest the author takes their feelings into consideration before writing any more garbage like this one.

This sad story scores an immediate 1/5 for its appalling subject matter,

AVOID IT AND VOTE ACCORDINGLY.

New lady, you haven't read many LW stories have you? Stories about cheating wives of deployed military don't do very well here. This one won't either as it is nothing.more than an overdone sex scene and not a story.

It's not swinging it's cheating . Tommy is being cuckold right now. She knew that she was cheating by not tell Tommy what she did .If she thought it was alright then why not tell her husband . In real life Tommy would kick Al's ass then report him and watch his career go down the drain. Then put her ass out on the street.

If Kim and Al wanted Tommy to join them then they would waited to talk to him.

My husband and I have an older couple as friends. We are mid 20’s and they are mid 30’s. They have introduced us to the joys of an open marriage and sex with others. After four years of sex with only them my husband suggested I find a steady boyfriend who I can call on whenever he or our friend is not available. I have never felt closer to my husband. This has strengthened our bond and made our lives so much more fulfilling.

been hotter if Al was 8 and Tommy 6

how can this be swinging when the husband isnt participating?

why do authors insist on lying to audiences with their tags?

If you believe in your story enough to post Ch 1, then posting other chapters shouldn't rely on the response to Ch 1.

2 divorces, a courtmartial, a ruined military career, a child who needs a family and has none and so many more surprises like child support collection issues. So many adventures, and at Elmendorf AFB Dawn comes a lot less often than in the lower 48.

Al's new name is Jody

He should know better. Hopefully this scumbag will get busted to Airman Basic and spend years in the brig.

Not really an interesting story yet. You have an "over sexed" wife who for some reason married into a military life knowing full well that the husband could and would be gone for long periods of time. She admits she cheated on all her boyfriends but this time she will be faithful to her husband. But alas, she can only go 4 months?

Blah...

Al calling Kim on the phone and telling her he just fucked Kim.

Yeah, I know: a lot of people will hate this story because Tommy was overseas and didn’t get to join in, but this stuff happens, at every military base in the country.

I know, I know, the LW commentariat thinks adultery is awful, horrible, beyond the pale, but let’s get real here: fucking somebody new is always a rush. Adultery exists because it’s fun!

In this story, Tommy might be overseas, but he’s going to get to fuck Kim when he gets back, and, if he can stand the Turkish girls around Incirlik, he might be getting fucked there as well.

A second chapter should be the phone call from Dawn to Tommy, telling him what happened. That removes the cheating aspect. The story

That was a flash comment, short. sweet and to the point. I didn't read beyond almost halfway down the first page, but I had it figured out what you are saying even before that. It doesn't bode well for comments in this genre. Signed: BTW

Hope they swap when her husband gets home

Right before I retired, I was rear detachment NCO for my company. Staff duty found three wives in the barracks one weekend and had the 8 soldiers they were fucking standing before the commander the next morning. Long story short, the three wives and their husbands were all swingers and had permission.

Definitely not my thing, but I get it and why. Don’t judge this story too harshly...

"My head was spinning with what just happened and what the future held. I literally could not wait to get to it."...She will get the divorce for sure! And I agree wit @ScorpioJJ: Al will pay for it too, because Armed Forces never forgive a fellow scumbag who doesn't respect the uniform he uses...If as @sbrooks103x says, you have more to post, better delete them! This is below garbage...1*

I didn't see a story here. It may happen at a lot of military bases as are a lot of divorces. This is about cheating and not about the military.

She's married to a man who is risking his life to defend our country. What is she risking, besides her marriage?

Embarrassing and stupefying. Congratulations.

And thanks for the effort.

Well written! I would love to see more of your work.

Yes, need to finish the story. I would like to hear Tommy's version and how or if he accepts it.

Loved yoyr story. Looking fiorward to more adventures.

Enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to more.

That’s why you can win a war lately

So pleased you published this! I am really looking forward to reading more chapters.

Liked your story a lot! I liked the realistic feel to it. A lot of the stories on Lit are over the top, I like the believable ones the best for the loveing wives category. Great job and I'm looking forward to more stories from you.

Don't understand the low score on this one. Whew. Hot. 5 Stars!

hope you follow up with another chapter at least. I'm ex-USAF so I can relate to the story.

I see my comment was deleted. Guess the author doesn't want to know how some veterans feel about the story.

There is no communication between Sweetie and Hubby, except for (her projection from) their previous fantasy-sharing. Since there is large gap between a person’s fantasies and what he or she can accept IRLife, this is a very risky behavior by Sweetie. IMHOpinion, this belongs in Erotic Coupling unless it is Chap1 in a serial. If THAT be true, it should have a Ch1 in the title, or at least a ‘2BContinued at the end!

3*

Sorry, it is a serial. BDF Delete if wished.