All Comments on 'Dawn's Anal Awakening Ch. 11'

I love anal stories, especially when the descriptions are as vivid as yours always are. It was good to see Eric again, and to see Dawn get some real man-meat in her asshole instead of just plastic ( not that the plastic isn't hot too)..

I hope you do one or two more in the Mail Order Slave series as well. There's lots more room for development as the relationship between Bee and her master develops. I can see her English improving rapidly and her gradually entering Master's life more fully rather than remaining a stay-at-home cook and fucktoy. That short series is one of the hottest things I've read.

I always love your stories! Keep up the great work

Excellent story you keep it "wholesome" while keeping it extreme at the same time.

There are lots of things you could add depth play, vacuum pumping, realistic inflation, and mild latex.maybe very light drugs for letting her go on uncontrollable masturbation/ sex session (poppers/muscle relaxants/ecstacy) nothing hard core or addictive.

Think you're doing well enough for ideas so far. Guess Dawn could have nipple rings and all 3 could be longed by chains and to her butt plug.

Loved the story and agree on the nipple rings and chains

Really love this story, can't wait for the next

I would really love to see her get a pisshole creamie that would be so hot. Or even a pisshole gangbang

That would require some build up with urethral stretching for a few chapters

More, More. Please the Dawn adventures... Bigger and more plugs, dildos...

Saw the real world is taking precedence for a bit, but would love to see more here

I think I'd like another sweet and slow anal scene, and maybe Kennedy should peg Eric while he drills Dawn. That would be nice, wouldn't it?