All Comments on 'Day Hiker Pt. 02'

by slutboy69

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 5 years ago
Editor!

Please, either do a better job of editing or get yourself an editor. There are so many sentences with words missing that you obviously never read back over what you write. Sadly it detracts from your story. Cheers.

slutboy69slutboy69over 5 years agoAuthor
thanks

i guess some stuff got lost when i uploaded it. is there a way i can delete it and fix it?

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous