All Comments on 'Days of the Raj Ch. 04'

by aaronburr

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ptebadenptebadenalmost 5 years ago
wonderful

Great as always. Please, don't delay next chapters. This is one of the best and hotest stories I've read. Pure eroticism. I can't wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
awesome

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great To See Yoru Hand Again

Great use of language and little details make it evocative of the time. Naked native boys and clothed white Women and Girls. There is an empire to build and subdue.

Knowing the history of the main protagonist she does go to the West Indies to bring up a generation of submissive naked black boys and empowered clothed white women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
tournament ?

guests from other schools who've signed waivers to play & stay for a week . unknowingly signing away there privacy . perhaps some white boys who think their superior to the africa and jamaica teams . perhaps some used for a size comparison from cold to warm climates and its affect on the penis .

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please, continue

The best story in Literotica and does not continue, why?

aaronburraaronburrover 4 years agoAuthor
It’s cumming!

Yes, it is the best on Literotica. And I’m making steady progress with Ch 5. It’s pretty gamey and you are bound to love it. Thanks for the compliment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
continue pls

keep checking for updates every week. u r god. pls update faster if possible. sorry for being greedy

aaronburraaronburrover 4 years agoAuthor
Don’t worry...

It’s coming. In next few weeks. I think it’s good. Sorry to make you wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Really great stories!

Your stories are so great! They are not only exciting but also realistic! Have you known that males had actually swum naked! And there must be female photographers who didn't back off entering male's locker room to take photographs of the males naked and to publish in newspapers! For example, Abigail Van Buren strongly advised of cfnm swimming and discussed it in several articles.

There would also be coal mines. While the men were working naked the females wore clothes. The males shouldn't wear anything because washing was too expensive and clothes may be destroyed by work. An interested thought, isn't it?

You can find more information here: https://sites.google.com/site/historicarchives4maleswimming/

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So Realistic

I am an Indian and this story is very realistic. Nude punishment was very common in the 90s and 80s. I was a boy at that time and I had a few personal experiences.

I was not good at study, that's why I got punished by my mother, grandmother, aunt and female teachers. The punishment was always naked, I had to strip totally naked in front of them, hold my ear and had to take ear holding knell down position for an hour or so. My sisters, cousin sisters, maids all allowed seeing me naked. They used to giggle a lot and tease me. After punishments were over, I had to do a naked ear holding situps and apologize in front of them. After that, I was allowed to put on clothes. Naked punishments were given not only indoor but also outdoor in the open house backyard to give more shame. Neighbor aunties and girls saw me naked and teased me saying " shame shame puppy shame. Naughty boy is getting nude punishment". Not only me, but lots of my friends also had naked punishment experiences in real life. once we boys played football in the mud and got our clothes dirty which made my aunt and other boy's parents furious. We all were punished naked in open nature, had to strip completely naked and wash in the village pond.

You can add my real-life CFNM naked punishment Indian moments to your story to make it more realistic. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Enjoyable

The whole setting and the many scenes are original and unique yet realistic. Probably the best writing in literotica for me hands down.

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