All Comments on 'Dead and Horny Ch. 17'

I love the LockPickingLawyer reference!

Would've been even better if Dana said things like, "little click on 1, 2 is binding, 3 is loose..."

5 stars, even without the LPL reference. Been a reader since part 1 of HFHM. Amazed at the consistent quality of your writing. A very rare thing for this length of time.

Gonna be hard to take a Vampyr named after a shampoo seriously, but I'll try. Enjoying the spin-off, good job.

Great chapter. Thanks

Boy you sure pack a LOT into 3 pages! Yet always leave me whimpering for more! I do love the way you think. A major pet peeve for me are people who swallow whole their parents, or some influential figure in their life, religious beliefs without ever stopping to think about it. I consider religious belief systems to be like snowflakes. No two are exactly alike. Anyhow, off my soapbox :). The new monsters are decidedly worrisome ,but since I love vampyr lore as much as the next person, I’m looking forward to the next chapters, especially since I know Dana and Lily must survive or that’d seriously muck up the whole story, eh? One thing does keep bothering me. It’s clear Dana has a natural eau du corpse scent. To me that just doesn’t scream “aphrodisiac “. I keep wondering why it doesn’t turn off any of the others . Geez and I can’t find a girlfriend.. ;) Thx for the ever fabulous fun!

Honestly you deserve the 5 star rating for the zombie girl art comment alone

Well done. I appreciate the little side story about demon edits to the bible.

Thanks for the chapter, a fun read as always.

While recognizing that angels and such in your universe have their own quirks not quite matching what real life religions teach, the discussion about sex and religion is worth commenting on, particularly the "people who hate sex" comment, which is tied to a common misconception. It is perfectly in character and appropriate to have here, but I want to note what religions (or at least Christianity) teach is actually that sex is extremely good and beautiful. This means though that abusing or misusing sex is inappropriate, such as doing it just for fun outside the context of marriage. The full details take a lot more to describe, so it is common for people to just look at some of the conclusions and entirely misunderstand what is actually being said.

Hi Annabelle and everyone!

Yay, a Vampyr to match our soon to be new friend (I hope), Tasia the Terse Therianthrope! And a bunch of assholes (well there's just one demon, but he's bodysurfing many people, plus the corrupt evangelist, plus the Vampyr, not sure about the kid) that is not affiliated with a Player, so they can actually die this story!

I expect the Curator to be a long-term antagonist, he's got to have other resources than "Esteban", so even defeating that demon wouldn't mean the end of the threat from whatever faction is lead by the Curator.

I hope that Dana and Tasia can team up to escape, and that they don't waste their regeneration powers too much fighting each other.

Of all the places to fight a vampire, Florida isn't the worst, assuming they've got the traditional weaknesses: lots of running water to cross in the everglades, sunny weather and I assume a fair amount of tanning cabins (for the UV light)... I'm less sure about the religious symbols (the guy hangs out with a televangelist) or the garlic (not familiar with Floridian dishes), but those could work as well. Since he works with humans, the "invite first" rule might not work well either. All that is of course assuming that Vampyrs (and even vampires) are concerned by such limitations...

We'll probably learn it in the next few chapters but I speculate that a Vampyr is a born cryptid, whereas a vampire is created by bite. Now how can an undead give birth, I don't know, but it's going to be interesting to see what lore Annabelle came up with!

On the demon of the deacon, I see a few ways to possess many people at the same time. The first one is simple, but not really satisfying, cheat the rules, either with a secret artifact (least satisfying) or a long forgotten loophole in said rules, say you get to possess a group only if they [insert condition(s)] (much better).

The second one is risky for the demon and probably the whole world: it's to mess with time and be technically possessing one person at a time, but be themselves several distinct temporal selves (demon from 10 years ago, from now, from a 100 years in the future, etc...). That can be fun but tricky to write and convey, even trickier to fight: if you kill it in the wrong order, what happens to the future possessions?

The last possiblity I see (but I'm pretty sure I'm wrong on all counts), is that the demon called in favors or outright stole the ability from other demons, who might resent them or be happy from the trade. This would add a 5th faction to the brawl (House, Order, Curator, evangelist, potential demons), and also be quite interesting.

What do you think?

Best wishes,

Cortavar

Loved it

I'm starting to wonder that if Tasia survives this story, there seem to be decent odds she ends up living at a certain house.

When is this side story going to end? Im waiting to binge it and I can’t go back to catch up on the main story either xd.

Waited for it and it was a bang, thank you for another amazing episode, can't wait for the next one and the escape plan. The hunters are now preys l.

Hate cliffhangers !

Because it s you

Goddamn it you going to kill me with suspense Annabelle, but damn that was a piece fine work can't wait for next episode 😍

Superior prose! My dearest Annabelle, you do keep me entertained! I have to imagine your awareness and knowledge of the unmentioned may not be humanly acquired. No matter. You know best. Please proceed. I cannot wait for your next installment.

Another great chapter ,loving all this keep it going till the Order is Happy or gone.

Well done, thanks for sharing. I'm enjoying Lily and Dana's adventures along with what I think is a growing relationship between them. Thanks for sharing!

Calling it now: the Curator is the one that came to visit Amir at the end of book 5.

Not only that, but I reckon Esteban is actually Sarah, because of the blue stone necklace, body hopping, been alive hundreds of years, etc.

Really enjoying where this seems to be going!

Ohhhh no. I hate when lily gets tortured. Hope Tasia and Dana get to finally have a conversation. The deacon is so deep, who knew he would bring this many surprises

W O W

SR

Hooked for sure as always!

This is the lock picking lawyer and what I have for you today is a Deacon brand lock sent into me by one of my viewers.

Thank you Annabelle for another great chapter. My personal Lust is for more chapters!

To commenter EscMan: I am chuckling at your personal hell you've created for yourself, good luck with it.

Amazing chapter, thank you!!! But I was hoping for a sexy female vampire (or vampyr I guess) that would be changed to need Mike's semen instead of blood!! Can we hope for that soon?? Best wishes

After over a hundred chapters of main and side stories vampires are finally here! As one of my fav monsters, I hope they really can shine. And I'm very curious what the spin on the mythological lore will be.

Plus, I hope there will be a sexy female vampire too sometimes soon, maybe in the main story ...

Thanks for another well crafted chapter.

You should add lockpicking lawyer to the tags 😉

I loved the reference.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I've caught up.....my binge reading is over.....now I have to wait with everyone else....

What?! I can't believe I finally caught up and now with the cliff hanger! I love this entire universe. Keep up the good work! <3

So I always did wonder do you think Lily could transport herself back to Mike even if she's ensnared?

So much action and, wow, all out girls are caged!

I'm sure somebody got a hard on reading that, not me.

But how had come a Vampyr to serve a demon?

Will Tesia join forces with our girls or her hatred agains themm will bu too much?

Oho...

But I can see a new basket at the Radley house some place in the future...

Nice "lock picking lawyer" reference.

Ah hell! They're fucked. And not even in a good way! Shit has definitely hit the fan and is now blowing in the wind. Duck y'all