All Comments on 'Dead and Horny Ch. 23'

Hi Annabelle and everyone!

Thanks again for that new chapter and a fore-conclusion to the second part of Dead and Horny! I love all your stories, but especially how vibrant your characters are, even (especially) with Dana the Deadgirl.

I really hope Tasia will find some solace, either in Greece or with Uncle 'Foot. But preferably with Uncle 'Foot, it's good for Dana to get a new love interest and start healing the mortal wounds that she didn't get time to process.

I also hope the Curator gets at least an ominous outro "Orcus on his throne" like. It's too late to defeat them in this story, but he'll need to be dealt with, if only because the Radley House is like a Christmas tree full of presents to capture and dissect for him. There's no way we won't hear about them later.

As always, you're the best!

Cortavar

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Nice. I really enjoyed this, and am looking forward to the wrap up!

Amazing as always, you continue to kill it with every chapter!

Wow!! What a chapter full of violence and sex. Love it!! I hope Dana will move on from Alex some, and Tasia eventually join the family. Exciting battle descriptions with all of the ladies. Excellent as always!! Thank you!!

Good chapter, lots of gore and spurious killing. I wonder what Mike would think about Tasia, and vice versa.

"Vampire heads in the freezer and other signs that you might be becoming a hoarder."

About to find out something horrific about his daughter in the next chapter I water.

Wow, that's great!

Loved this chapter, and the teamwork those girls used to take on Timotei, brilliant. Great work and looking forward to more in your fantastic series.

Thank You ❤️

Wonderful as always!

Fun fact: in Danish the word for vampire is vampyr.

That was Fantastic, The Memory she had with the D and D was great. All your stories are great. thank you .

You are getting annoyingly awesome with these cliffhangers. Awesome piece

Nothing like a good WWE Smackdown Cage Match. Timotei head in a bag would make a great peace offering for Tasia to her father and The Order I would think. Plus, I'm guessing the Man in the Hat is behind all the disappearances in The Order. Kind of makes you wonder if he came from their and fell off the true path as it were.

Glad to see Dana is moving on emotionally. Maybe her and Tasia will catch up at a later date. Maybe between Tasia and Cyrus as well as possibly Ingrid they could get The Order to agree to cooperate and take out HatMan once and for all. Then negotiate a truce between themselves.

Very entertaining. Loved the scene with Dana and Tasia in the shower and the heart to heart pillow talk afterwards. Hard to tell if Lily is friend with benefits or waiting in the wings.

Hopefully Eulalie doesn't need too much therapy. I'm sure she'll have much more respect for the away team now. :)

Keep up the great work! I've bought all your books on Amazon as well as the co-authored ones as well. Can't wait to see what is next.

Poor Timotei losing his head over a daughter that lost her head :/ nice takedown though. I got terribly emotional with the d&d flashback ;_;

Thank you for sharing this beauty <3

(With the fight scene complexity, portals, 4vs2vsZombies, I can imagine this was a chore for the review team)

Dear Annabelle,

Thank you and your team for your fantastic story telling and writing, even if this one was a bit too gory for me...

And now I have to wait another month for the "mental cliffhanger" to be resolved...

Take care and have a nice weekend,

Fishkopp

Not sure what is going on but I can’t give you the well deserved five stars. No voting for me. Thanks for a wonderful penultimate chapter. I can’t wait for the finale

have some stars for Ihop, they have to take them eventually

also the tags get me every time XD

still havnt forgiven you for Velvet though

Can't wait for Dana to be 'kinda fixed'. My goodness the concoction that girl ate.... Lily deserves some good good loving from our resident bathtub boy

Read and enjoyed !

Thank you for this “almost denouement“! The worlds and plots you are creating are amazing; thank you (and your beta readers) for your commitment to excellence!

Very goood.

Once again Ma'am, you have written a piece of literature that was impossible to out down.

I am both looking forward and dreading the next chapter.. looking forward to see how it ends...and dreading the fact that it is ending.

OMG Ms Hawthorne...The combat and the psychology of a reawakening ... love it all.

SR

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BIG HUGS FOR YOU!!!

One more to go.

Another brilliant chapter

Thanks for the erotica in this lit. I enjoyed the last chapter (and the most recent HFHM chapter as well) without a sex scene, but your stories are much better with the erotica that you write so well.

Boy do I miss Velvet!!!!!!

In all of the confusion going on since chapter 21, does anyone besides Annabelle know what has become of Deacons daughter? Might she be an inconspicuous host for Legion Prime?

I know, I'm way to into these stories. But I love them. Thank you Annabelle.

For whatever reason, it won’t listen when I try to give your story stars - but you do get 5 of them.

Awwww, puppy Love! (with a dead Girl)

:-)

I needed some action, I got plenty. It absolutly worth the wait.

As ever, thank you so much for the gift of your writing.

Brilliant!!!!!

Finally caught up to the present! Excited to be part of the journey :)

-AT

Although I think Timotei will come back eventually, this was a great fight with him and a cool way to kill him. But as his daughter is still with Hat Guy I believe at least his head will play some role in the future.

I really liked Tasia's arc so far and I hope that if she gets a send-off for good next chapter it will be worthy of her.

But there are still so many unanswered questions I doubt will be answered next time. So I'm hoping for D&H book 3. And for a nice / cruel interogation.

Another chapter worthy no less than 5 stars.

Hmm. It occurred to me that now Dana has consumed werewolf blood. So will Kisa and Dana be taking turns with Mike every full moon? Will Dana find another moon when she fixes the telescope and what effect will it have on her?

PS Their, there and the're. I can't believe I screwed that up in my previous comment. D'oh,

Love This chapter. awesome job.

I’m kinda laughing at Dana trying to lock it down so quickly. Fairly self-serving ploy. Give Asterion or Yuki a shot! It could be a remake of “Fox and the Hound”

the action is incredible gore. the sex is sometimes rough but the best is how well you makes grow your characters with every twistin the story.

congrats

Not gonna lie, I would absolutely love to read a 'slice-of-life' style story about the arachne family. From the time between 'The Last of Her Kind' and the first book of 'Dead and Horny'.

If you're good, I'll buy you some ice cream after." Dana swatted the succubus on the butt, eliciting a yelp. "I might even let you eat it out of my lap."

Lmao!!. Yuk yuk. You are so bad! 😂.