All Comments on 'Dead Zone'

Very creative and original premise. Well written.

I agree with the other comment, it is original and creative. It’s also deeply disturbing (to me) too. Thank goodness it’s just a fantasy.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Absolutely excellent read if youre in to dystopian fiction!

Reading about the chip reminded me of how much i loved"uglies' 'pretties' & 'specials' were equally good reads. If you ever have writers block, i highly recommend you check out the series :)

holy shit. this was the first story that came up in the mindfuck tag and I wasn't disappointed.

This is super hot. Adore the premise and the potential for cruelty here is delightful.