All Comments on 'Dead Zone'

This is super hot. Adore the premise and the potential for cruelty here is delightful.

holy shit. this was the first story that came up in the mindfuck tag and I wasn't disappointed.

Absolutely excellent read if youre in to dystopian fiction!

Reading about the chip reminded me of how much i loved"uglies' 'pretties' & 'specials' were equally good reads. If you ever have writers block, i highly recommend you check out the series :)

I agree with the other comment, it is original and creative. It’s also deeply disturbing (to me) too. Thank goodness it’s just a fantasy.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Very creative and original premise. Well written.