All Comments on 'Deal Me In! Pt. 01'

It was pretty hot, but the screaming in all caps was kinda cringe, like a cheesy porno. Tone that part down and you've got a winner.

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Fantastic debauchery here!

Good characters: nice communication, planning, and a great balance to the progression. Quick, yes, but it took us where we wanted it to go – and we're looking forward to the next parts!

A really sensual story which had a nice flow to the storyline. Looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully Beth and Jeff can be included.

Good story. But the repeated references to Jamal being Black will have many here thinking it should have been posted to interracial.

That was great! I have a hotwife and well and LOVE fucking her used cum filled pussy.

But thanks for the effort. Hope the wife makes good use of her sampling to find someone worth being loyal and exclusive with.

Cant wait for The next lnd

Hugplx - The screaming in caps was an experiment, but I can see why you would make that comment. I didn't do it in my previous two, and it does kind of seem a bit over the top. Thanks for the comment.

Poacher11 - You must have a crystal ball.............

Great story…….having a hot wife is great entertainment. Hopefully she gets her black gangbang very soon. Please write a few more chapters.

Happy married to the neighborhood bike I guess. Enjoy your STD's.

Great story , we both enjoyed reading it together. Looking forward to another chapter.

Jamar will have her in a black whorehouse within a month.

best I've read in a while.

Average rating. Good sex description but the husband is a gross cuckold. I am a BTB type of person. NO man will ever touch my wife without losing a part of his body.

Read first page and last page. I am certain there were 3 pages of the wife having sex with hubby’s friends. A well used plot. Author wrote the husband dumb as a rock. Letting his friends play with his wife is questionable. I mean they are going to see them often and what does the husband get except friends that want to drop by and use the wife. Then hubby ends the chapter asking the black guy if he knows a group of black guys to gang bang his wife. Wow great idea. Maybe she can get hooked on drugs and bring home a STD cocktail to husband. And I am certain everyone will keep this private except for a good buddy or ten and a brother and a brother in-law, cousins and anyone they are talking to in the bar.

Very well written. Very erotic. 5 stars. I think she'll have to do anal with the black guys. At least that's what I'm hoping for. Reading on

Omg that is so hot, it's like you have been reading my mind. It's Exactly how my fantasy goes, one I've had for many years.