All Comments on 'Deal With My Sass and Eat My Ass'

Well written start, was just about grabbing my interest when it stopped short. I understand you may wish to submit a chapter at at time, but longer please if possible.

Not meant as a criticism, just an observation. Looking forward to more soon.

Great story please write the next part soon

WELL DON'T STOP NOW!

"To be continued..."

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I hate, hate. HATE getting to the end of a story without a chapter number in the title, and only then finding out it's not a complete story.

Well... It is something. It is a start to something possibly. Just, in whatever direction you've chosen to take this, hopefully it was wise.

Next part, please!