All Comments on 'Death by Ejaculation'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow.

More.

qwikguyqwikguyover 12 years ago
Exciting

I enjoyed the story. Developing this new life between the two of them or as they meet mortals would be a great read!

chris_brownchris_brownover 12 years ago
great beginning

this is definitely worthy of more chapters

DmitryDmitryover 12 years ago
Nice

First part was great, as it fits in the errotic horror category, but the second part, I am not too sure.

angelx602angelx602over 12 years ago
Interesting

This was great, unlike anything else I've read. I will enjoy reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Truly Awesome

This was an amazing story all the way through. I would love to see what adventures will be had with the new powers. Hopefully there are many more chapters to come!

jane marwoodjane marwoodabout 11 years ago
5*****

I must add my thanks for this story. Exceptionally good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice story

Please continue with this story

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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