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"Please Rick? Please?"
Rick was silent. Karin almost didn't dare to breathe and waited silently and apprehensively. Almost fifteen minutes later, he smiled, sadly, but it was a smile. He asked Karin, "Do you know how two hedgehogs make love?"
Karin was flabbergasted. What was that for an answer? she thought, but answered, "No. 'Why?"
Rick smiled again and said, "Very carefully. Shall we try to be like these hedgehogs?"
It took Karin a few seconds to see the implication of Rick's question. She cried out, relieved and happy, "Yes, yes yes!"
The End
- COMMENTS
01Timber67about 2 months agoWhy did you kill off Linda ??? And why did you bring Karin back into his life in the end??? He’s just going to be screwed over again by Karin 3⭐️
Flamethrow2 months agoA very touching and insightful examination of one man's life and the women he loved and that loved him.
usaret2 months agoThe final chapter was terrifically sensitive. Linda’s illness and passing brought this old retired soldier to tears, even though I chastised myself for it. I have to give an author who displayed an understanding of humanity the highest possible rating.
Anonymous3 months agoHell no! The fact he didn't sell her to a cartel that owns a string of whore houses back in chapter 1 or 2 shows a complete lack of self-respect. Your writing improved significantly but the story went down hill, then off the rails and finally into the dumpster. Letting that toxic cheating skank slut back into his life would be like trying to go our and contract cancer.
Pairadox3 months agoIt was a joy, watching the eveloution of your writing over the course of this story. Well done!
Anonymous4 months agoShe may have treated him like crap but a real man doesnt run away. No good reason for him to do so. Just shows his weakness as a man.
mfj775 months agoVery poignant. Found it unusual that we didn't get Linda's background, etc. until very late in the story. Think the story could have used more detail of the relationship between Linda and Rick after she recovered and before the proposal. Also, not enough detail about Frank; what happened? Did he just disappear? Marc's wedding disappeared somewhere as did the divorce decree and "talk" requested by Karin.
As a non-native English author, you are writing VERY well. Any editors / helpers you are using are supporting you in a great manner. Please keep up the good work.
