All Comments on 'Death of a Master Ch. 05'

i can understand how this would be a hard chapter to craft but i think You did an excellent job of it. i am a follower of this series and was excited when i saw another chapter posted. the suspense mixed with the eroticism is great. again, thank You for sharing Your talents and i cannot wait to read more.

So glad to see another chapter... and as always, you did an amazing job!! Looking forward to what happens next.

I have followed all of this story line and this is a good segment. However, killing off main characters really annoys me. I read for pleasure and if I want tragedy I can simply read the newspaper.

I am looking forward to Galactic Whore, but again unless you cleverly resurrect Busjin I did not like that development either.

i'm loving this whole story!!!

can't wait to see where we go next!

please - let's see charles do in the stalker!!

i can imagine it is not easy to kill off one of your creations and then admit you do not deal well with death. i can only say you did very well indeed. i suppose as a male i should not admit that i shed a tear for Susan and for Val remembering the death of her husband but i did. This says much for the depth of feeling conveyed by the excellent writing skills of Dweaver999.

A very sad chapter but still full of love, fun, and mystery.