All Comments on 'Debbie Gone Wild Ch. 02'

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widespreadinterestswidespreadinterestsover 19 years ago
A little better

but still not what it could be. You have a good premise here, though I do wonder what all the strange guys think about the clothed man with the camera wandering around the room. Please slow down a bit, describe in more excruciating detail what is being done to Debbie, not just a sportscast-like blow-by-blow (as it were).

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