All Comments on 'Decent into Debauchery Pt. 01'

by LucidlyConfused

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more

one of the best I've read on this site!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
fantastic

Absolutely brilliant. Had me hooked straight away. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work hun xxxx

albertaboyalbertaboyover 8 years ago

Very hot, can't wait for chapter two.

snowwalker2012snowwalker2012over 8 years ago
Decent into Debauchery

Very well done. Not a "Five" but a strong "Four". In general well worth reading and I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
very erotic

You have a way of putting the reader into your place. I can't wait for the next post. Keep up the good work. And thank you for all you do!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wonderful

Looking forward to much more.

olsaltyolsaltyover 8 years ago
There is Decent and Descent

Unfortunately, you seem to have chosen the wrong one for your title.....

Keep it up, nice warm read on her deScent.....I'm sure dozens will help point this out, and I would hope in a polite way...........

LucidlyConfusedLucidlyConfusedover 8 years agoAuthor
Unfortunate event

I must say my misuse of the word decent was caught and corrected during the editing process however did not make it to the final submission due to oversight on my part. I appreciate everyone who liked my story despite the error and to those who politely brought it to my attention.

XOXO

LC

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You can still edit the title

Just submit "Decent into Debauchery- EDIT"

Then in the body & comment, say "I would like to edit the story title to Descent into Debauchery"

It might take a week or so for it to be fixed. Afterwards submit the subsequent chapters with the correctly spelled title.

osamelyhrebicekosamelyhrebicekover 8 years ago
I love it

I cannot wait for next message from the Mistress. Of course with next part of the story. Well written with very original storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ever?

Will this very interesting story ever go on?

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