by DG Hear
Were you drunk or drugged when you wrote this? I barely made it through this crap.
She was raped. Why not report it? Why hide like she did something wrong?
Why didn't she call the cops and have blood work done???? It was rape. She's guilty by not reporting it. WTF? Also, why dose a guy? I didn't care for this, but Bill did get what he deserved for dosing the two.
I like the "revenge" on Bill, but I agree that Chris should have reported the rape.
But this Story was missing some details . My Ex wife and My Sister worked on a Women's Crisis Line .. My Sister said that only about 20 % of the Rapes were reported .. That Figure might Be Lower nationwide .. My Cousin was Raped Twice . Once Physically and again in the Courtroom . To Watch someone You care about get asked such Step By Step Details . I Hope that None of You or Your Loved ones have to go through that .
I agree with the comments that she was drugged and raped as was her husband by Bill. The fall off of the roof was true karma and quite frankly it may or may not of been an accident, but Jim's comment at the end of the story makes me think that it was not in fact an accident. oh well no one will ever know for sure. Well done 5 stars
This was an interesting, but sad story. I agree that the husband should have reported his “ friend” drugged him. And broke off all interaction with them. Wifey did not seem supportive at all. I can tell you, 99.9 % of dancers in a club that give a “ lap dance”, just do that. Having sex with a customer is a big no no, and will get you shut down fast. Plus, two 20 year old hotties, will make $100.00 each in tips in a good hour- No need to do the nasty.
Also, when wifey was raped, she allowed him to get away with it? That was just wrong, on so many fronts. Just let him walk away, so he can do it to somebody else.
In my opinion, it all goes back to the simple adage, “ if you wouldn’t do it in front of your spouse, don’t do it” Some women are fine with their husband going to a strip club. Some are not. In any case, not talking about expectations of behavior in a marriage, dooms you to situations like this. At least, perhaps now that wifey experienced being drugged and raped, in her book, they can move on.....yeah, it’s kinda f’ed up.....
Ps- Let us know where you find college girls, willing to bang for $100.00. I bet they will be really popular, on this site!
Poor communicators. They each should have told their spouse. Ending was puzzling.
Just a sad story. I guess she got back at him in the end, and he got even?
Except the fact, neither one, will ever trust the other again. 3 stars
Who needs enemies when you have friends like Bill? It looks like he drugged the two partners, i.e. Bill and Chris. And what about Judy? She seems to be a catalyst in the messed up relationships and marital problems of the three couples. Based on the epilogue, Judy got what she deserved and can now go on her own into all the deprivation she is probably hoping for. I just hope that no child of hers will eventually be a victim of her loose morals!
A reluctant 5 *
BJ
She needs to tell him. Should have told him already. Especially when she could prove Sarah was his. Now she needs to let him know Sarah is his by saying the DNA tests were automatically done these days.
They start out saying no secrets and end with nothing but secrets. This is a pos. She got away with it, and this will cause eventual long term issues.
A well-done story and presented correctly. I do wish the ending were a little more detailed as to a real answer if it were a planned accident. Bill was a creep and deserved to be a de-nutted or at least permanent E.D. from the fall.
Fortunate that Jill heard the last comment.
She apparently likes to play on a slippery slope.
She will soon slide into humiliation and a divorce, during which time she will continue,to carry her secret, to her death.
Not a bas story although this is not a new idea. Vague ending is just fine, probably the best for a short story.
Chris literally should expect an extremely hard fall should she ever disrespect her husband again. Allowing her attitude toward her husband to be influenced ever again by vanity or arrogance would no doubt prove to be a fatal mistake. People would say, 'I'm not sure what happened to Chris. She had become a real bitch right before she died."
More questions than answers. But I still liked it. Author forces you to extrapolate and speculate, but there's tons of contradictory evidence, so short of a part 2, that's all we have to go by. Nobody is lily white in this one, somewhat like real life.
The MC was really stupid! Just because Sarah was his does not mean he was not Cuckolded! Pathetic story!
Some people should keep their mouths shut and refrain from commenting last anny is a shit for brains loser of5. 17 oh well it takes all mindset
Vengeance is mine saith the lord! lmao man I hope Jim pushed him
I'm so glad the kid was his. I cant think of anything worse than having your wife carry another man's child and having to live that humiliation for the rest of your days.
Love this story
Great authors post great stories. The asshole fell 5 stories, not even time to realize why he was pushed.
I guess this fictional story occurs in a universe where human beings do not co tsct the authorities for things like, oh say, rape and being drugged. Bill was a piece of excrement and a sadistic predator. Seriously, no Goin to the authorities? Made zero sense. The drugs woukd be in his system. She messed up, but was raped. Afterwards was a cluster *bleep*. 3 stars.