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by DG Hear

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I guess this fictional story occurs in a universe where human beings do not co tsct the authorities for things like, oh say, rape and being drugged. Bill was a piece of excrement and a sadistic predator. Seriously, no Goin to the authorities? Made zero sense. The drugs woukd be in his system. She messed up, but was raped. Afterwards was a cluster *bleep*. 3 stars.

26thNC26thNC8 months ago

Great authors post great stories. The asshole fell 5 stories, not even time to realize why he was pushed.

Hiram325Hiram3259 months ago

Stupid spiteful bitch, going to that party solo...

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Vengeance is mine saith the lord! lmao man I hope Jim pushed him

I'm so glad the kid was his. I cant think of anything worse than having your wife carry another man's child and having to live that humiliation for the rest of your days.

Love this story

olblueyesolblueyes11 months ago

i seldom ever give a 5 but this tale really hit the mark!

lc69hunterlc69hunter12 months ago

left enough questions at the end. Like it, and the ending

Oldfart72Oldfart7212 months ago
Comments

Some people should keep their mouths shut and refrain from commenting last anny is a shit for brains loser of5. 17 oh well it takes all mindset

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

The MC was really stupid! Just because Sarah was his does not mean he was not Cuckolded! Pathetic story!

NitpicNitpicabout 1 year ago
What

What a rushed ending.

CrazyDaveTrucker60CrazyDaveTrucker60about 1 year ago

More questions than answers. But I still liked it. Author forces you to extrapolate and speculate, but there's tons of contradictory evidence, so short of a part 2, that's all we have to go by. Nobody is lily white in this one, somewhat like real life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Neither one of them reported Bill for drugging them?!? Rape also for her!

orion2bear2orion2bear2over 1 year ago

Bill got what he deserved

DOC226DOC226over 1 year ago

What is the old saying? DON'T GET MAD - GET EVEN !

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Those shingles can certainly be slippery LP

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Chris literally should expect an extremely hard fall should she ever disrespect her husband again. Allowing her attitude toward her husband to be influenced ever again by vanity or arrogance would no doubt prove to be a fatal mistake. People would say, 'I'm not sure what happened to Chris. She had become a real bitch right before she died."

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fucking cunt

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There's a bit missing near the end

dark2donut2dark2donut2over 1 year ago

Not a bas story although this is not a new idea. Vague ending is just fine, probably the best for a short story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fortunate that Jill heard the last comment.

She apparently likes to play on a slippery slope.

She will soon slide into humiliation and a divorce, during which time she will continue,to carry her secret, to her death.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

CUCKADOODLEDOO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A well-done story and presented correctly. I do wish the ending were a little more detailed as to a real answer if it were a planned accident. Bill was a creep and deserved to be a de-nutted or at least permanent E.D. from the fall.

DrgwngDrgwngabout 2 years ago

They start out saying no secrets and end with nothing but secrets. This is a pos. She got away with it, and this will cause eventual long term issues.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 2 years ago

She needs to tell him. Should have told him already. Especially when she could prove Sarah was his. Now she needs to let him know Sarah is his by saying the DNA tests were automatically done these days.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Who needs enemies when you have friends like Bill? It looks like he drugged the two partners, i.e. Bill and Chris. And what about Judy? She seems to be a catalyst in the messed up relationships and marital problems of the three couples. Based on the epilogue, Judy got what she deserved and can now go on her own into all the deprivation she is probably hoping for. I just hope that no child of hers will eventually be a victim of her loose morals!

A reluctant 5 *

BJ

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just a sad story. I guess she got back at him in the end, and he got even?

Except the fact, neither one, will ever trust the other again. 3 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Poor communicators. They each should have told their spouse. Ending was puzzling.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was an interesting, but sad story. I agree that the husband should have reported his “ friend” drugged him. And broke off all interaction with them. Wifey did not seem supportive at all. I can tell you, 99.9 % of dancers in a club that give a “ lap dance”, just do that. Having sex with a customer is a big no no, and will get you shut down fast. Plus, two 20 year old hotties, will make $100.00 each in tips in a good hour- No need to do the nasty.

Also, when wifey was raped, she allowed him to get away with it? That was just wrong, on so many fronts. Just let him walk away, so he can do it to somebody else.

In my opinion, it all goes back to the simple adage, “ if you wouldn’t do it in front of your spouse, don’t do it” Some women are fine with their husband going to a strip club. Some are not. In any case, not talking about expectations of behavior in a marriage, dooms you to situations like this. At least, perhaps now that wifey experienced being drugged and raped, in her book, they can move on.....yeah, it’s kinda f’ed up.....

Ps- Let us know where you find college girls, willing to bang for $100.00. I bet they will be really popular, on this site!

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

I agree with the comments that she was drugged and raped as was her husband by Bill. The fall off of the roof was true karma and quite frankly it may or may not of been an accident, but Jim's comment at the end of the story makes me think that it was not in fact an accident. oh well no one will ever know for sure. Well done 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
4 Stars

But this Story was missing some details . My Ex wife and My Sister worked on a Women's Crisis Line .. My Sister said that only about 20 % of the Rapes were reported .. That Figure might Be Lower nationwide .. My Cousin was Raped Twice . Once Physically and again in the Courtroom . To Watch someone You care about get asked such Step By Step Details . I Hope that None of You or Your Loved ones have to go through that .

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
I like it

I like the "revenge" on Bill, but I agree that Chris should have reported the rape.

gfrhgfrhover 3 years ago
Huh?

Why didn't she call the cops and have blood work done???? It was rape. She's guilty by not reporting it. WTF? Also, why dose a guy? I didn't care for this, but Bill did get what he deserved for dosing the two.

tomc55tomc55over 3 years ago
Wrf

is every second paragraph missing from this story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
?

What the hell was that?

ctdansctdansover 3 years ago
liked it but...

She was raped. Why not report it? Why hide like she did something wrong?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Were you drunk or drugged when you wrote this? I barely made it through this crap.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

One of your worst, and that's saying a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Information

I don't like how she threatened to cheat on him after he was drugged and raped. People who have sex after being drugged (Someone spikes their drink, not taking drugs willingly) are being raped as they can't give consent under the influence.

Also, why not tell her husband that she was raped by Bill? Why go to the house of a guy who drugged your husband and had him raped?

Lastly, this is to everyone accusing her of cheating. She didn't cheat, she was raped.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
P U ! 🤥

Lousy ending! Way below your usual effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

With as many stories as you've written, you occasionally put drop a stinking turd. THIS is that stinking turd.

TajfaTajfaover 4 years ago
Why didn't she scream?

I assume the house wasn't a 20 room mansion where her cries wouldn't have been heard so why did she just lie there and let him rape her - that is what it was. Why didn't she scream the house down, call the police and have the drink tested for drugs? She had no intention of actually cheating and her threat was just a reaction to her husbands cheating (that seems to be okay with some other commentators) and didn't deserve what happened. Apart from the lack of screaming I thought this was a good story, well written 4 stars

danoctoberdanoctoberalmost 5 years ago
The wife made a choice.

Go with her husband's family to a football game or go to a party. What does she decide?

She goes to the party, does drugs, cheats, and gives birth to another man's child. Why would she do that? Because there would be no drugs and sex at the football game.

The husband got some revenge but should figure out how to get that skanky wife of his up on a roof.

Up on the roof top, click, click, click...off of the roof falls that skanky bitch.

OPrimeOPrimealmost 5 years ago
Proof Positive

The wife is a dumbass. Bill should have squared up with her and told her to forget the revenge BS. When she refused he should have dragged her stubborn ass down to the Attorney's office and started the paperwork!

Why make it complicated.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Great

Another great story. Bill.was a little too free with the drugs, and.finally it caught up with him. Judy had to know what Bill did to Chris. Some friend. Justice was served.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 5 years ago
Here's a quote that stays in the mind:

"After shooting his load into my pussy, he got up off me and squeezed my tits one more time. "I wouldn't tell anyone if I was you. Jim just might get hurt," laughed Bill."

I wanted to cheer when the jerk died.

I don't know why some of the comments claim that she cheated. Why would she lie in narration? I do think it foolish of her to play the threat the way she did. Honesty in a marriage is paramount.

Good story. Thanks for sharing.

Mauser45Mauser45over 5 years ago
My mistake

I shouldn't have said 'cheated'. I should have said drugged. But my point still stands.One star.

Why don't we encourage people to speak up against rape?!

Mauser45Mauser45over 5 years ago
1*

Timriv's kind of story. Timriv would balk at the idea of Jim daring to spend time with his own fucking family and not attending a party with his wife. Timriv would say it's Jim's fault she cheated.

Well, fuck Timriv. One star for the fuckwittery she kept hidden from Jim

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
DG cuck cuck cuck

His stories involve nothing but wimps. Seriously like 5 out 6 stories involve wimpy cuckolding.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A SWEET CUNT HE WAS MARRIED TO.... SHE LOST HER HUSBAND'S RESPECT AND CAUSED HIM TO COMMIT MURDER

When she overheard what he said to their daughter, she should have been thankful that she wasn't on that roof,.

Another dumb cunt who can't add 2 and 2. When she was told that he was DRUGGED, that should have been the end of it. Also, when that cocksucker fucked her, she owed it to her husband to TELL him about it, instead of doing all the things she did to hide it from him. Women think men are stupid? Who do men fuck when they're sick of taking their so-called partner's bullshit. OTHER CHEATING WOMEN who want to get fucked. Statistically, over 70% of today's wives have, are currently or will fuck men other than their husbands. Hence... men are coming to know they can trust women to honor their commitment no longer than a half hour after they've fucked them.

I gave this one five stars but with some reservations.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Lying conniving cunt

Lying cunt. Why would you do that to the man you love.

fisheronefisheroneover 6 years ago
Secrets

Jim admits to his mistake and wife learns he was drugged and then goes to new years party and takes drink and gets drugged most likely. She wanted truth but didn't give truth. She should tell him the truth since she was raped and bill being dead.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

she is not wife materal

KRD19254KRD19254almost 7 years ago

It's good, but Bill admitted to spiking Jim's drink that helped get him into the back room - what a buddy. She knew Jim was drugged (Judy told her) and she still blamed him and then tried to extort the threat of revenge. Then she was stupid enough to go to a Bill/Judy party by herself with no safeguards. Judy enabled the rape.

Jim made a mistake, under duress when drugged. When she threatened to willfully cheat for revenge - the trust was immediately beyond broken, and then go to party to imply her revenge.

Jim should have walked away when she made the threat, giver her a grip on reality and pull up some big girl panties. She NEVER came clean with Jim but he had to come clean with her - typical female hypocrisy and now her superior female naivete` created a bastard.

This story just has to many implausibilities and loose ends.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
read like....

Bill's wife was in on the rape!

Her husband came clean with her, she should have done the same!

Fact is she should have went to police, had blood test, and rape kit!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
THE ULTIMATE PAYBACK

for Bill who had spiked her drink then raped her...he was the scum she was innocent but why not tell hubby what happened...he knew she had done something wrong after he found her very clean panties so she removed the evidence of sex...good job the DNA matched...but he got his revenge on Bill....one little push...goodbye asshole....the wife knew he was the one who killed him....there she knew he knew about her being fucked by Bill.....why not admit what happened

RhomanovRhomanovalmost 8 years ago
***

This just felt wrong. Major plot points just dropped. Secrets that apparently weren't. Sorry, but the parts just don't sync.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
2 stars

Well written but crappy story.

She needed to come clean and Bill actually raped her.

Very unsatisfying.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A Rather Stupid Husband

In the first instance, when we find hubby Jim actually partying with horny college sluts under the direction of his fiendish and predatory "friend" Bill, we know that he is downright stupid. Forget the supposed drugging for the time being. He already has very low trust in Bill, but there are no alarm bells going off when hot girls and their hard nipples saunter into the room?

Yes, Jim has some problems and those problems start with his mind, which has the formative force of a bowl of raspberry Jello.

But any man sitting around drinking cheap beer and hooting and jeering in the stands of a sports stadium while his desirable wife trots off to a New Year's bacchanalia with a sexy silk bra and panty set under her tight jeans is worthy of an epic guffaw. Jim is a joke. He is a weak-minded fool and has his priorities in the wrong place.

Anyway, at least you know Jim is not a sissy. He might be a damn fool, but he is not a sissy. He has a hard dick and gives his wife regular vigorous fuckings. Bravo. That's a start. But throwing caution to the wind as regards his sexy wife and her time away with her friends chips away at his credibility as a man and a husband worthy of respect.

Much ink has been spilled blaming Chris for her fall with Bill. One must agree she was totally naive. But most all women are naive in this respect. Given certain conditions her fall was completely predictable. Chris is a woman. She is a woman and therefore has a natural naivete regarding her ability to resist the wiles of a predator such as Bill.

No average woman is to be "trusted" in the presence of a skilled playboy and predator.

The problem is not so much with Chris, she is the only one in the story who is has her heart in the right place. No, the problem is men and their ridiculous feminist "trust" in their wives.

Your sexy wife has a gas can. Why give some other guy a match? Damn fool.

At any rate, I think DG fk'd up a bit by introducing the date-drug aspect in Jim's slip up. It is introduced and then Jim does not use it in his own defense to Chris when he tries to come clean. It is mentioned only in passing. Why?

Chris actually knows of her own husband's drugging but she waggles off to Bill and Judy's party alone and actually takes a drink from predator Bill's own hand? She takes the drink and tips it back? She then feels "ill" and lies down in the back bedroom? If there were a time when readers have a right to do a little re-writing in the Comment section then it is now: Judy takes naive and fulsome Chris back into the slaughterhouse and gives Bill a wink. Bammmm!!! Believe it.

Rotten-hearted cheaters despise the thoroughgoing sweetness of a desirable and faithful woman, and Chris was their quarry. Maybe Judy should have been up on the rooftop chortling with Bill before they both got the shove.

Also, there is a moment in the story after the birthing when Chris is talking to the doctor. In the eyes of the reader she has already taken a serious downgrading: first she gets into a fucking with Bill, and second, she hadn't taken a dose of RU-486 when Bill could very well have his festering seed growing in her belly (Are You For 86'ing This Baby?). Why is it that the doctor gives her a "quizzical" look? One definitely has the creeping feeling that he is some type of do-gooder that has taken it upon himself to cover something up...just a thought :))

A story with unlikeable characters is rather unlikeable itself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Morning After

She should of gotten a morning after pill if she was that worried.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
There Is No 'Getting Even' In Marriage

No two incidents involving a husband and wife in a marriage are identical. A wife cannot get even with her husband; and a husband cannot get even with his wife. If one spouse is hurt by the other spouse, there are only two choices...either forgive the spouse and move on; or divorce the spouse and move on. 'Getting even' by having a planned affair will only lead to a shattered spouse and a bitter divorce. No one can prove to me that deliberately hurting someone you love by 'getting even' can in any way improve or fix a marriage. 'Getting even' with a spouse is like deliberately breaking your right arm because your left arm is broken. Even children aren't that stupid!

SampkyangSampkyangabout 8 years ago
Well She Got Even

Same unexpected way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Pill

You go and see a clinic Doctor, get a prescription then pay cash, no records, no pregnancy, no problem!

sinsational83sinsational83about 8 years ago
I agree with Ib_Says

I truly agree with Ib_says. Chris should have screamed rape, and was honest with her husband. But that just goes to show you how almost all women are. At least her husband was honest with her, he deserves the same from her. What a bitch. She got lucky as hell when the DNA test showed that the hubby was in fact the father of their kid. anyway good story though. 4 stars to ya on this one.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysabout 8 years ago

Chris was a hypocrite, she should have told her husband, better yet, at the night of the party she should have screamed rape rather than accepting it, and gone to the police accusing Bill of rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
justice

was served "up on the roof"

need more of it.

5 stars for justice when it rarely happens.

krosis666krosis666over 8 years ago
According to herself

Jim was a cheater, and had no excuses, even though she KNEW he was drugged by Bill. So, following her own thinking, she intentionally cheated with Bill! Not only that, but she actually tried to ensure she got pregnant by Bill! By CHOOSING to not take the morning after pill, that meant she was trying to make sure she had Bill's baby. It didn't work out that way, as the baby was Jim's, but wasn't from a lack of trying on her part, to have someone else's child.

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
a whole cast of unlikeable people

doing bad things to each other.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Just a Hunch

I think Jim knew all along that Bill had raped his wife. I think he didn't bring it up because it was better his wife lived with the sad effect and also...if she had to talk about it, his pride would make him leave her.

Finally, you bet...Bill fell of the roof...right?

sinsational83sinsational83almost 9 years ago
Couldn't have said it better

I guess that sdc92078 said it almost word for word from what I was thinking. With one exception.......I feel that Chris should tell Jim what happened. I mean after all, Jim did confess to her what he did, and let the chips fall where they may. Oh and by the way as with all of your stories this was a well written story. I really enjoyed it good job.

sdc92078sdc92078almost 10 years ago
Seems more or less appropriate

Jim and Chris both slipped and cheated on each other. Assigning more blame to one or the other of them based on how or why is just splitting hairs. There's no double standard here, they each earned one black mark in the cheater box, and they each had one incident of being cheated on to get past in order for their marriage to survive, and fortunately for them, they dodged a bullet when Sarah did not turn out to be Bill's child.

Bill, on the other hand, was the major architect of both Jim's and Chris' falls from grace. So anything done to him seems like suitable revenge for both.

krosis666krosis666almost 10 years ago
Sometimes

Don't you wish an asteroid would fall out of the sky, and obliterate certain people. I don't want ANY survivors from this story.

KarenEKarenEalmost 10 years ago
Judy

Frankly, I don't believe for a nano-second that Judy doesn't know what happened.

She should have scratched Bill's eyes out till he got off her, then decked Judy for not stopping him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hm.

No decent characters in this story.

Can't have any empathy for such a bunch of degenerates.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 10 years ago
She was vindictive - even naive or maybe stupid

BUT she was drugged too - so anyone who is willing to advocate excusing him should excuse her. She did not choose wisely going to the party but she DID NOT ever plan to cheat - the author says so so we have no right to rewrite his story for our misuse.

Jim fathered his child NOT Ted so the only remaining issue is what does she do with her secret - she set her self up for failure and did. No vicious bitch here just a stupid human.

Nice work thanks

sdc92078sdc92078about 10 years ago
Revenge fuck, bad idea

All it ever does is drive a second nail into the coffin of the marriage. Divorce, separation, a year of sexual denial with the cheating spouse in a chastity belt, whatever. But keep the penalty or retribution totally within the marriage and don't bring anyone else into it.

monkcalmmonkcalmover 10 years ago
almost perfect

but wife needed to have a accident...chainsaw fucked would be preferred...squeal like a pig bitch.

IronDragonIronDragonover 10 years ago
Wow...

Once again, the SECRET is the double standard. Well, apparently it wasn't much of a secret, since Bill had that unfortunate accident with Jim as the only witness... At least he got his vengeance on Asshole. Making Wifey live with the uncertainty that he MIGHT know about her revenge and MIGHT have killed Bill in retaliation is eating her up inside. Hubby did the honorable thing by telling her that he'd cheated, but had been drugged at the time. The fact that he'd been drugged was even corroborated by Asshole's wife! But did that matter to Wifey? No. She did the dishonorable thing by going through with her revenge anyway and then keeping it a SECRET.

So yes, the Double Standard here is twofold. First, Wifey keeping it a secret from Hubby after demanding complete honesty (and getting complete honesty) from Hubby. Then she decided that the same rules don't apply to her.

The second Double Standard is like another commenter said: If Wifey had been date raped by Asshole first, and Hubby went off on her and vowed revenge like she had, he would be the Bad Guy. Those are the Double Standards here. NOT the fact that Hubby and Wifey both cheated. Both were drugged, but Wifey was a LOT more there than Hubby was when he was drugged. Wifey could have reported Bill for rape, or at the very least told Hubby that Bill had raped her.

I still think it's probable that Hubby found out about Asshole raping his wife anyway, and decided that enough was enough.

patientleepatientleeover 10 years ago
Nice.

I love the ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Really?

"Great to see its not the husbands fault that he stuck around, got drunk/drugged, and did the dirty. But when the wife does the same, she's a cheating whore.

Ah the mysoginst [sic] world you all live in. Hate to be a women [sic] in your world."

There still seems to be some confusion as to why several commenters have called this a double standard regarding Chris' actions in the story. It is not about the sex, folks. It is all about the honesty- or lack thereof.

The story opens with a premise:

"We had agreed before we even got married that we wouldn't have any secrets between us. To the best of my knowledge, it's the way it's always been, until recently."

Jim lets the reader know that the core value of the marriage is NO SECRETS. Not fidelity, but the truth. This is important later, keep it in mind.

When Bill apparently drugs him, Jim's inhibitions go out the window and he eventually blacks out. Remember, he did perform oral sex on the girl- while drugged- and she returned the favor, but the GIRL put the condom on him and rode him to climax. He did not put the condom on himself. Intent to cheat vaginally is not present. And while you can say oral sex is cheating, I am certain that his wife would not have gone anywhere near as ballistic if she knew it was only oral.

Jim should have come clean right away. That was his downfall, but he did come clean eventually. He could have continued his lie of omission but told her the whole story. The fact that she already knew does not change the fact that he did not know that when he confessed.

Chris' anger is justified, but even after hearing that Jim was drugged, she could not see that this was at the very least an extenuating circumstance. After all, what is "a good excuse" for cheating? He didn't set out to do it, and it took drugs to make him cheat.

She mind fucked him for almost two months with her "get even" threat. We knew- and Jim did not- that she apparently did not intend to get her revenge. Or...maybe not. This brings us to the New Year's party.

Making her husband choose to go to the house of the man that jeopardized his marriage over a yearly tradition with his family? And her choosing to go alone- for New Year's? Not verifying that her other friend Emily was going (umm, was making a phone call that difficult)?

Really?

Chris clearly knew that Bill was not a nice man. That he had already drugged her husband and set him up to cheat. That he was more than interested in her physically. That her friend Judy was also a cheater, and that Bill and Judy had been swingers at least once. And let us not forget that she dressed very sexily for a party that she knew her husband was NOT going to attend. For whom was she dressing?

She knew practically no one at the party- and still stayed. Accepted drinks from someone she knew was capable of drugging her. And yes, I know she was raped and did repeatedly say no (all of you who say she couldn't say no must not have read the same story I did), but did not cry out for help or make an attempt to stop Bill from inserting himself inside her. If she had enough body control to spread her lips for Bill's entry to be smoother, she had enough control to push him off or as others suggest grab his balls and pull. Bill had as much to lose as she did with exposure. But again, this isn't about the sex.

It is about her honesty. While Jim opened the story with the idea that they had no secrets, Chris opens with:

"We rarely kept things from one another." (Told you to keep the marriage core value in mind.)

That is hardly the same thing, people. Never and rarely are not equivalent. So she clearly believed in keeping secrets from her husband even before the rape. It's right there in the story.

She decided not to tell her husband that she was raped. Then she denied him sex to ensure he would not suspect. And when she missed her period, she was willing to let Jim raise Bill's baby to keep the secret. Three strikes and you are OUT!

THIS IS THE DOUBLE STANDARD! Not "he can cheat and she can't", but he must tell the truth (and pay for it) while she can lie and keep secrets- never paying for it.

Jim says something that proves he was a fool to trust his wife:

"She loves me with all her heart and wouldn't do anything to jeopardize our marriage."

Really? Could have fooled me with the events as written...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
BTB double standards comments as usual

Great to see its not the husbands fault that he stuck around, got drunk/drugged, and did the dirty. But when the wife does the same, she's a cheating whore.

Ah the mysoginst world you all live in. Hate to be a women in your world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Too bad Jim didn't divorce his whore wife, after all if she didn't want to fuck Bill she would have gone with her husband to his families house. Therefore that tells you that she was secretly hoping to get Bill's huge cock inside her body and have his fill her belly with his sperm. She's a real piece of work keeping her cheating to her self and not telling her husband.

JounarJounarover 10 years ago

I agree Harry and Irondragon on this one.

The wife in this tale was nothing more than a petty and vindictive cunt.

"I talked to Judy and she said Bill came clean and said you both picked up women and had sex with them. She did say that Bill had put something in your drink to make you hornier. I can't forgive you for cheating on me. You could have left, instead of going to a private room with other women."

So even after finding out her husband was drugged and not in control of his actions, she still had to have her revenge and later even admits its worth the cost of her marriage. What kind of sick fuck would would even consider hanging out with a scumbag like Bill who they know used some kind of date rape drug on their spouse just to rub salt in their partners wounds and worse is willing to pass a rapist's kid off as her husbands?

Considering how much wifey knew about Bill by this stage she sure didn't fight him very hard and really seemed to out of her way to put herself in a position he would fuck her, so zero sympathy here for her.

As another poster claimed, if it was the wife who had gotten date raped first and the husband was acting like a total bastard by blaming her for fucking another guy and telling her over and over again he had to have some revenge to get even with her, people would be demanding he be hung, drawn and quartered.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Basically amoral actors here

Hard to detect any love in this story, other than self love. Tit-for-tat is not love. First degree murder is a pretty big elephant in the living room. These are not nice people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent as usual

DG,

Very good job. ultimately readable.

Matt

chytownchytownover 10 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Britease

wrote this story a couple a weeks ago. 2*

IronDragonIronDragonover 10 years ago
Umm, njlauren...

The whole damn tale was a Double Standard! He did it and TOLD Wifey about it because he somehow knew he wasn't in his right mind when it happened. He found out later that he had been drugged. He was given a form of date-rape drug that made him hornier than usual. Some date rape drugs do the same to women, while making their memories hazy about the event.

She did it and KEPT IT A SECRET from Hubby. While she was also drugged, NOBODY pointed out more than once that Hubby had been drugged. A major plot point was wasted there. It was treated like it didn't even happen, as it was only mentioned once and had no bearing on Wifey's "revenge".

Also, Wifey KNOWINGLY parted her cunt lips for Asshole, instead of fighting back! She was "All There" enough to know that it was wrong, but she did it anyway. Revenge on a drugged Hubby, while she was drugged with something different? Or if it was somehow the same drug, it had a different effect on her.

Either way, the SECRET is the Double Standard more than anything else. The Rule of their marriage was NO SECRETS. Also, if she'd been raped, don't you think she would have TOLD Hubby about it?! But then, she didn't give a rat's ass that he'd been drugged, so she probably thought that he wouldn't give a rat's ass that she'd been drugged too.

Read and comprehend what happened, njlauren.

potsherdpotsherdover 10 years ago
Not sure I believe

...these stories about conscious and deliberate revenge. My view is that anyone can make a slip and be forgiven, but only an exceptional person would extract tit-for-tat revenge for a partner's past behaviour. There is something so cold and unloving about it that I can't see how it could ever fit in a loving partnership.

OOAAOOAAover 10 years ago
EXCELLENT!

Fantastic story!

Thanks

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
happy ending.poor elsewhere

Granting that there are more construction workers than senators or opera stars, the story reflects the social environment fairly well. Given that, however, Hubby's behavior in his cheating scenario is inconsistent with everything else DHear writes about him. Hubby KNOWS Bill is a skirt-chaser and cheat. Why would Hubby allow himself to get into such a compromising position? Second, WHY would Bill give Hubby a magic elixer? Does Bill foresee an opportunity to score on Sweetie by compromising Hubby? REALLY? It may work out that way, but portraying Bill as Nicky Machiavelli ... not likely!

Last concern ... How could Hubby become enlightened? Bill might have made obscure comments the few times they were together, but that could have been the AssHole simply being an asshole. He was very unlikely to have outed himself explicitly and with enough detail to convince Hubby to drop his ass off a roof!

2.9 = 3*

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I gave it 5 stars ...

... The wife is not a cheater; she is a rape victim as was the husband. Both were drugged/poisoned by Bill who got what he deserved. I like this story! I see no wimps or cuckolds. Panther Fan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
She did it, yes.

And Jim did it too, far as I can see,

It's just that when Jim fucked Bill, he made sure he fucked him right.

A man doesn't leave that kind of "fucking " to chance.

Wonder what was going through Bill's mind as he was starting to go over the edge to eternity?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Like a Moderate

In today's political climate. Nobody's friend. Your story straddles the two extremes in readership of LW stories. The BTB guys aren't happy and the simpering cuckold crowd is even less so. I went through the infidelity experience and, while my marriage didn't make it, I learned that most marriages do indeed make it. The experiences of this couple almost always result in reconciliation. Another fact: one-time cheaters who never confess to their spouse most often become better (wiser) husbands or wives.

pakmul48pakmul48over 10 years ago
Right on

Gave you 5. Wish I could have had revenge on all my ex wife's lovers, but half the men on earth would be dead. Easier to just divorce her. When I was in the Navy some men said certain women followed the fleet. The fleet followed my ex.

Bill1104Bill1104over 10 years ago
Good story can't understand Annon's stupid remark

This wasn't the best but it certainly wasn't the worse - actually a pretty good one. What I can't understand is the vicious remarks from "Anonymous."

What a jerk!

Bill1104

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
SHOULD A DECISION HAVE AN OUTCOME

or an excuse to a result. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Stupid Wife

After she mentioned Bill told Judy he put something in Jim's drink she decided to go alone to a party at his house when she was off the pill and then was surprised and pissed that she got sick and then raped. The kid being Jim's was just dumb luck. Hated both characters. They both knew how Bill and Judy acted but kept putting themselves in the line of fire.

BTTapBTTapover 10 years ago
Huedogg

Her justification was revenge, of course. I can relate to wanting a revenge fuck to balance the scales. Not saying it's right for everyone......but I think I would want that in her shoes, even though hubby didn't go out looking for it, was drunk/drugged, etc. Some would say that if you need a revenge fuck, the marriage is over already, and maybe they are right. Ironic thing is, she wasn't even intending to do the revenge fuck thing, only wanted to screw with hubby's head a little. Whoops.

-BTTap

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 10 years ago
Bttap. help me with your frame of thought

How did she have justification?

BTTapBTTapover 10 years ago
Interesting

The interesting thing about this story is that the main characters, husband and wife, each basically did the same thing: a one-time drunken (and drugged, thanks to good ole Bill) slip that neither had gone out looking for. He had no reason to do it, she had some justification. He eventually came clean, she never will. Each made different decisions when faced with the same situation, and I found it interesting how each reacted (both realistically), and how the commenters have reacted to the actions of each.

This was the right kind of story for the 2 different perspectives to be used.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

A man who cheats on his wife, using the excuse of drugs is the kind of man who deserves a wife who will cheat on him and force him to raise another man's child.

You lay down with dogs, you are a flea.

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