All Comments on 'Deep Dive Ch. 01 - New Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You did a great job in creating your world along with explaining all the info regarding a deep dive and the pod itself. This appears to be a new wrist on the MMO and I cannot wait to dive into more of this story and see some of the in depth workings of the Ygress world. Just plain brilliant and couldn’t be more thrilled so thanks for posting this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just please don't make this a LitRPG thing with literal stats. These kinds of stories can work without that and are much better for it.

MysticalRubyzMysticalRubyzover 1 year ago

amazing keep up the good work

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My Series in a nutshell: - Deep Dive - Action, Sci-Fi, LitRPG, male-to-female. A guy accidentally picks a female character to play and is stuck in a game that unexpectedly gets more and more lewd. Strong focus on the story despite what I wrote in the previous sentence. Not ev...

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