All Comments on 'Deep Down Inside Ch. 13-16'

You have probably finished the story but I would really love to see a Graham Camille hatefuck scenario. It probably won't happen but certainly something that would be amazing to read

I'm a little disappointed that the story has somewhat plateaued. It went from the revelation that in Ch. 9 Camille let Gordon fondle her and gave him her panties to another four chapters of teasing. It seems like a mistake to up the ante so much and then pull back and let the tension sputter out.

EPIC ! would be an understatement ...

There are just not enough letters in the alphabet, to describe the feelings in real words of what I just read ?

Fuck Meee ...is the closest I can come up, in this latest of your instalments.

When you bring out the pleasure in words, two constantly conflicting states of the human Body, mixed with the raw sensual Mind the likes of yours ... Yes, you created Candy for the Mind!

Please keep it real, the way you know how, and continue to make, and build on this exotic taboo flavour... which melts in our Mind !

Thank You Odeon for sharing your ART with our human Kind .

ps.

the Stars you get, are endless

I have to agree with theomegadirective's opinion. It feels like the plot hasn't advanced at all after the initial buildup. While the writing is good, the the characters remain stuck in a loop. Hoping to see a clear direction for these characters in the coming episodes.

Very very good. Very erotic. Love it. Amazing work!

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